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1. Workshop and Project Introduction: Hello and welcome to
my outlining workshop. So outlining can be
overwhelming if you're new writer or you
haven't found in outlining process
that works for you. So I thought we
would work through my outlining process and that you could use that as a jumping off point for your
own outlines in the future. My name is Kit Campbell. I'm a hybrid author, which means I'm both traditionally
and indie published. And I'm also an editor, a book for matter of very
occasional cover designer, and a manager of an indie press. This class is part of the
writer's motivation series, which is a series of classes and books designed
to help readers find the techniques
that are going to help them reach
their writing goals. So this class is for beginning and
intermediate authors or for anyone who is
new to outlining or hasn't found in outlining process that's working for them. So the outlining technique
that we're going to go over in this class is one that I've been using for
five or six years now. I find it works really well
for stories that are between about ten thousand and
seventy five thousand words. If I'm running short story, I do use a different
outlining process. And if I'm writing
a longer story, that's a 100 thousand
words or so. I find that I need
more outlining. But this is kind of a
good starting place. It's in the middle in terms
of information and planning. So if you go through the techniques in
this class in there too detailed than you, that's good to know because
in the future you know that you don't need
as much information before you start writing. And if you go through and
it's not detailed enough, then that's good to know too. So you can start to figure out what additional information you need before you
can start writing. So our project for this class is to make
an outline for a story. And each section of this class, we'll go over a step of
the bottling process, starting from expanding
a story idea. And at the end of each section, I will tell you what you
should do for that step. So for example, in
the next section, I will show you how to
expand your story idea. And then you'll do
that step yourself. Though the supplies
you will need for the project include at
least one story idea. A computer with a word
processing program or a pen and paper, if you prefer to
do things by hand. Access to the Internet
in case you need to do research or look up
some story ideas. In the project section, please post what part of the process you're in
and if you're running into any issues and if you
have any other questions, please put them in
the comments section. You're also welcome to post your outlines if you'd
like feedback and please come back and update your projects as
you complete steps. So at the end of this class, you will have an idea of at least one
outlining technique. And you will have an outline that hopefully you will be able to
start reading from. So let's get started.
2. Expanding an Idea: All right, In this
section we are going to serve as some
story ideas and we're going to expand them to
see if any of them will make a good story. So my goal here is to
write a novella i 0, 1, 2, my publishing company. And so I'm going
to use this class to get it my outline ready
so that I can read it. So I'm looking at a story between about 30 to
50 thousand words. So I need to expand one of these ideas enough that I know I can get that
much story out of it. So I have prepared
some story ideas here. So starting here at number 1, someone thinking they're taking part in a Becker
groping session, discovers their deep
into the real thing. Sorry. Q, one friend
must enter a labyrinth, maze to save the other. End story idea three is this picture which actually
took on a vacation. That red and white
building in the back is a active elementary
school right next to a graveyard on top of a
hill called gallows Hill. And if that's not the perfect
setting for a horror story, then I don't know what it is. So these are all fairly
old ideas for me. I pulled them out
of my idea file. So I highly recommend keeping
track of your story ideas. It doesn't make sense to
always start with a story. When you have the idea, you might be in the middle
of a different story. You might be on deadline. Might be an idea
that you don't feel comfortable writing
yet because you don't have the skills
or the knowledge. So keeping track of those, you can find them later
is really helpful. I actually have a class here on Skillshare about how to keep track of your story ideas if
you want to check that out. But the nice thing is
with a story idea file, you can go back and
you can pull ideas out that compliment the story to make it more complex and deeper. Or you can go in and find story ideas if you need
to write something, but don't have an idea already. Like sometimes, you know, you get a story idea and it
comes with everything you need to get started writing and you can just
go and it's perfect. But other times like right now, you have a deadline
or an assignment. And you don't necessarily have the story just ready to go. This way. You can go in, grab a couple of ideas, see which one is going to
work and get going that way without having to wait
for inspiration to strike. So at this point, I've identified these
three potential stories which seem like they would
be good for developing. And what I will do
now is I will kind of pre-write to see if I can
make enough of a plot, characters, stuff like that, that it would be worth
it start outlining. So I pre-write because that's
the way my brain works. If you're more visual person, you can also use a mind-map
or something like that. We discuss other
similar outline methods in my outlining class. So feel free to look over there if you watch this
and you're like, I don't know if I can do that. But the nice thing about a
free write is you just start reading and you write
down everything that comes to mind and you
don't send it to yourself. And then afterwards
you can use what works in your actual outline. Okay? So her story
idea number 1. The idea is that there's
someone who is invited to do a backyard role-play
that is set up like, oh, maybe like a
Renaissance Festival. So you know, there's
someone pretending to be the king and there's some
opportunity to be the princess, and there's nights
and stuff like that. All right, so let's see, let's do maybe a teenage boy is invited to join
in for my spelling. C by every teacher named me. Maybe lay drama teacher, like you like that. They were acting
in the backyard. Although the issue
with having a teacher do it, There's lying there. Maybe not a teacher
but an older students. Maybe someone who's
just graduated. That makes them more
appears and it's not weird. Power Ingles,
role-play is set up. And there with King gets fine. Clean, nine-eighths, three. Now, I cannot spell today. And see the boys they're doing
and thinks it's super fun. And it gets really into it. One day. This would be the
inciting incident. P is given mission. Maybe he's a night rescue, axis brown. That's a bit obvious. I don't know that we need to
figure that out right now, but he's got to
rescue the princess. It turns out it is a real
princess in an alternate world. And he is no longer
in the backyard. Okay. So let's see, I've got the basic plot of
inciting incident. I have main character. So that's enough for me to
get into my outline so that, that story has potential. I have enough information where I could start
to outline it. So I will move on
to the next one. This one has always
given me trouble. I had been floating
this idea around for oh, really long time. Because I like the idea of
the bond of friendship. Mean enough that
one friend is going to risk everything to
save the other friend. And I love mazes, and I love the movie labyrinth. So but then the issue is I can never get enough details to figure out what
direction I need to go in. But we'll give it a try. We'll see if we get stuff and then we will move
on to the last idea. Okay, one person must enter, elaborate this maze
to save the other. So do I want a boy and girl? Two girls, two boys? I always kinda go
a girl and a boy. I don't necessarily want
a romance angles, okay, maybe the boy gets
kidnapped and again, the middle globin
girls got to save him. Why was he kidnaps? Didn't kidnapping maybe this into a Snow Queen adaptation. And they've always
wanted to do that too. So the board is taken by the Snow Queen as character. Who all right. Good girl. Feel like she
needs to rescue him. We're only showing the way that she feels guilty about k. So then why is he
cannot bear with that? I don't know if I'm spelling once. That's essentially just
the adequate nose. So or maybe We've been best friends. But now they're currently hurt. Anyone of them. And return relationship. That can be really
traumatic for teenagers. And they heights. One is peak in here
because of the plate. Right now I like that better. I think we'll leave that
one there great Now. And then we have the picture of the school on the gallows
Hill Nixon cemetery. So there's really two ways. There's really two ways. I can see this going. Please have a new students, early teenagers, and this is going to be
an adult or an adult. If you need to need to keep coming to work at school. If we do that, I think it will
be golden school. We don't really have
boarding schools here, but it is a good way to have people trapped
at the school building. So I think this story, Gothic were, so you've
got to be trapped then. The Gothic element is that
you're isolated and endanger. Let's see. So we've got our
boarding school. You have either a
student or a teacher. Say, let's assume
schools haunted the connection
between the scores. So someone died at school. Maybe they want revenge, or there can be ongoing
practices at the school. A link to the problem here is now I've got
multiple stories going, so you need to kind of work
on one over the other. I'm kinda lean towards doing the teenager lower the peaker. My thought with the
teacher was then it could be an
elementary school, which is what it actually is. A little pins can be
extremely creepy. I'm not actually sure I want
to deal with those kids. And it may be better to
use the teenager rows. Okay? So next step is to look at my three
ideas and pick one. And then two, do the
world-building phase. So that will be next section. So what you should
do it this point is if your multiple ideas
kinda brainstorm them and see which ones are turning to actual stories and which ones aren't quite solidifying yet. And pick one to
move forward with. And we'll use that one
for our next section.
3. Building Your Backstory: Welcome back. It's been a couple of days
and hopefully you have picked a story idea that
you are going to expand. The one I picked, the Gothic horror with the boarding school because
that's the one that I started to get ideas for after we did the brainstorming
session last time. So I have started a Google Doc. This is where I tend to
do my brainstorming. And also it helps me keep
everything in one place. So I have done between less section and this
section is I've gone through Pinterest and added in some additional ideas that might go along with the story. So the thing, what
stories is your rain tends to do two things when you start trying to
map out your plot. The first is that it tends
to go along familiar paths. So stereotypes, familiar plot
lines, things like that. So I like to use the
backyard RPG star idea for an example where there's a boy who goes to
save a princess. That's kind of a
stereotype idea. And knowing which ideas of yours or stereotypes
can be a good thing because it can help you put those stereotypes
on their head or add in new things to him. Or I mean, it's okay to use stereotypes as long as you understand that they
are stereotypes and y are using them. The other thing that your
brain tends to do is follow the same plot lines from other stories
that you have done. Because each of us has kind
of comfortable stories, stories that we like, stories that we bring before. And your brain just kind of wants to write the
same story over and over. Maybe, you know, one
times its speed. So when time gets
in the Old West, but it's still got
similar elements, which isn't a bad thing. If you become a published author and you write up a lot of books, having some similarities
in between those books can make it so that your readers
know what they're getting. But it's, again, it's
good to be aware of. But because your brain tends to take the path
of least resistance, what I like to do before
I really get into the meat of determining what my story is
going to be about. I like to go through my story idea files and
pick out little ideas that can enhance or change my original ideas
so they don't get stuck in the same
runs over and over. So here we have my document. So here's the original story
idea that we did last time. And then here you see that I have some Pinterest links and then a couple of additional
notes on the bottom. So I keep my story ideas files
in two different places. I have some Pinterest
boards and I have a Google Doc. Will pull good. Okay, So this is my Google Doc. And it's literally just like little bits of thoughts
from all over the place. Tumblr posts, National
Geographic articles, things I over here,
random thoughts. So I always go through
here and see if any of these ideas can go along with the story ideas
I'm working on. And then I have my
Pinterest boards. So I have five of them. And then I also sometimes do
board specific to stories, but select this board is
specifically for scenery. So whenever I come across
the picture that I think is cool or interesting
and I can see, you know, setting a story there. Then it goes on this board. And then I have a
character board, same sort of idea. And so have some text posts. So far I've never
used the text posts, but the idea is that, you know, if I needed kind of a
pre-built character, I could pick one of these
options and use it. And so I always kind
of cruise through here by sometimes, you know, characters come with
their own descriptions, then I don't need to do this. And sometimes I just cruise through and
see what I've got. Then this one is my
inspiration board. This is like My very favorite ideas. So this is a mixture
of everything. It's got some prompts, It's got some characters, it's got some settings. It's just anything that
really speaks to me, goes on the inspiration board. And then I've got
writing prompts. Typically use these
for short stories. But it's just any sort
of prompt goes on here. And this one, this is
kinda my catch-all. So like this, not even like necessary lea stories
that are triggering anything but they
might at some point. So they go on here. So this prompt board or prompts that I am more likely
to use and the other one. There's not really a
good reason to have to prompt board that just
kinda ended up that way. So I go through my
Pinterest boards, I go through my random
idealist and I pick out any aspects that seem like they can help me with my story. So for this particular story, I've opened a couple of the ones I picked out
to go along with it. And I'll just put
through them real quick. So a lot of the ones
I picked out here with the story include like creepy Force, ghost, spirits. Then this is who I'm considering using for
my main character. Actually, I went through my
character board and I had like three or four pictures that were essentially
the same girl. Some of them were drawn, some of them were pictures, but it was the same
dark-haired girl, dark eyes, freckles, which I thought was
interesting because, you know, I add them over time. Okay. So here you can see all the things I added on that might help me
build up my story. And then the very bottom, I have my ones off the
random idea folder. So turning P holds up to
down, keeps goes out. Apparently. Doppelgangers, scary. Now know about this one
but something to consider. A ghost or really
just people who are temporarily in
the wrong place or time or dimension, right? So at this point, I've kind of got all my vague
brainstorming done. And what I will do at this point is start to build out specific. So I'm going to
look at backstory. I'm going to look at characters, and I'm going to
look at setting. So I did actually guys can't see this. Okay, there we go. So I'm not necessarily
going to build this up in any particular order, but we are basically going to use the same
techniques we did last time where we are
going to pre-write. And then we are also going to take note of any
research we need to do, which I will do before I
do my actual outlining. So let's see here. So background. Let's see. Main character turns a rare scholarship
spot at prestigious. And see if I can spell it. Currently, I can't
boarding school. One that has turned out. Let's see, this one
that practical good would practically
guarantees success in life. Now I like this because nobody likes reading
about rich people. They like to have an
underdog in building conflict where you
have poor people, rich people or you know, the insiders versus outsiders
and all that jazz. Okay? And again, it's going
to be a small school. 50 people down here. Small school, maybe
50 people isolated. Surrounded by a graveyard. Know. And beyond that, that's
the isolated on top of a hill, a desk breakfast. So I'm thinking New England. This because New England
forests are super creepy. They're very dense. They have a lot of like the force out here are not scary. There are a lot of empty spaces. The trees are kind
of spread out. You can see pretty far. So they're not
inherently creepy. New England forests or computer. So let's say Connecticut. I don't really know anything but communicate what we want. So this is where I
would make a note. It says like research
forests in New England. There No, I can not
typo on doing this. And then I will highlight this, I really do it and
it's visually obvious. Also need to research
boarding tools in general. It turns out there's quite
a few of them in country. And they tend to
primarily be only secondary or like high school. So let's see. The research I've
done so far says that boarding schools tend to only be 4 ninth
through 12th grade, though some also operate lower
grades for the day only, like a normal school. Okay. We're going to give her
heart paths and maybe Scott, single parent, no siblings. Maybe just got no parents. Maybe you're granted it. Maybe they just died. Just died. So this is an opportunity to turn her life around. Is that doing in Boston? However, something is
not right at the school. Now, this, this information
that we're doing now doesn't necessarily need to go into the book at any point. It's just important
for you to understand why things are the way they are. So that, that comes
across through the writing without you having
to be explicit about it. So this is all going to either not being included or come
out as the book goes on, the info dump, the stuff
that we're doing right now. So my thought is that there's a pact with something
at the school which guarantees its success. How ever in return, every, let's say 20 years. That's like once a generation. Every 20 years or so. Someone unless be
sacrificed in order to maintain the pat MC. Well, be the sucker guys
if she's not careful. But someone is trying to help someone who
sacrifice get math. Since the NCSBN be haunted. But that goes to
trying to algebra. So the idea is that, you know, she's going to see
strange things and he's gonna think
someone's out to get her supernaturally when
really the ghost is trying to protect her from being
sacrifice like they were. Okay. So characters, so we have
our main characters. Thank you. Need to name. So my favorite name website
is behind the name. You can search by meaning, you can search by at this city. You can do mythology names, you can do historic names, biblical literature, basically everything
you'd want here. So I like to search by mean. Ainsley, Let's see. Lone, solitary. Right? So then when I find
a name that might work. All right. In here, normally give
myself a couple of names. Not really and your
linen names here. So let's see, let's
search something else. So we can search like
grave, for example. Then you can do
it by gender too. So this is another thing you can do if you know like the timeframe of your character. So assuming she's
like 16 through here and see if anything
that interests. You got put on here. So for this one, I'm not doing much for me. The names that
Shakespeare turns out. Sometimes you can
click on the name and they have related names. Like people are named after it. C with some name days for
today, including Finland. Around it. Like you didn't. I tend to like names that
I can make nicknamed of maybe Mary who already has a takeover,
but I kinda like it. Okay. These Henry like Alice
clue is this vector. Let's see what else
to be done, right? Okay, So I've got a
couple of names now. So normally I leave
it for a little bit, see which one kind of
grows on the overtime. So the NC is going to be. Click senior, little old school. Not really have a good idea
of her personality it, so I'm going to do
some work on that. Then I also need it goes is
going to be protecting her. She's also going to
be 16 years old. And whenever died, let's see. Maybe 80 years. No. She was sacrifice. And now try to
save other marked. I don't do attend. I don't tend to do a ton of character work at
this point just because I'm not a 100 percent sure how many
characters I'm going to need. So normally, there'll be some sort of antagonists
decide from the ghost. Probably in her class is like a coil and see a mentor who will be triggered. Then close tours of
that later went on. Okay. And have it be a
couple hours though. And you made your
town maybe happening. So they really are isolated
and see great stories. I will need to draw a map
of where they're reading. Let's see a new story or rules to get lessons. Then of course,
are often without. Okay, so I have edited out some parts of
this process just because it's long and not
very interesting to watch. But basically the idea is to start to build the
basis of the story. Third, Tickets,
my ideas flowing. So what you should do at this point is go
through the same process, figured out why your character is where they are at the
beginning of the story. Why the antagonist is
doing what they're doing? Who do you need in your story? What places it's
going to take place? And any research need
to do before you can actually start doing
your full outline. And then next time, we will actually sit down
and outline the story.
4. Working Through the Outline: Hello and welcome back. So it's been a couple of
days since the last section. And I've gone through
and fleshed out my backstory and world-building
more from last time. So let me show you guys this. So you're still, you know, the basic idea of the stuff. You'll notice characters
have names now and positions in the story. Done some research on
boarding schools and porous. And I've made a list of things I still need to do before
I can start reading. The main, one of which
is making a map of the school that is going
to be very important. And I also need to decide
whether it's a girls only school or whether
it's mixed gender. And I also need to
decide if I want to do character wants and needs. Basically that's
just kinda figuring out your character's
motivations. And oftentimes, what's oftentimes what they want and what they need
are not the same thing. I don't do that a lot. Sometimes it's helpful, other times it
doesn't really help. So I just need to decide
if I want to do it or not. So basically I have done most of what I need
to make my outline. And so I'm going to go
ahead and do that now. I'm actually going to go through two different types of outlines. I've used both for longer works, but I don't normally use
both for the same work. But I thought it
might be good to go through both just
so you can kinda see how they're different
and how they work. Okay, So the first one is
this tent pole outline. So if you think of
your plot as a tent, you've got a couple of major
pulls that hold the tent up. These are your
biggest pop points, the most important
ones in the story. So you have your
first plot point, which is where Act
1 moves into two. You have your midpoint in
the middle of the story where something has to change. It's often called the
midpoint reversal. If things are going well, then they switch so they're
going poorly and vice versa. But anyway, something major needs to happen
at the midpoints, something that kinda
changes everything. And then the second
plot point is where we move from
ACT to interact. Three. So when I do my tent
pole outlining, I always make notes of my arcs. So I have an internal
arc and external arc. And if I had a relationship that was important to the plot, like if it was a romance or there's friends or
family that are important, have a relationship arc. Now, Gothic horror tends to have an isolated
main character. So I'm not going to have any major relationship
works for the story. And then if I had more
than one main character, like I was doing a
dual point of view, like a romance for example. I would put the eternal
art for both characters. External are for
both characters. And I would do
that here as well. So I was tracking all of them. So I've gone through
already and I've come up with my arcs for the story. So an arc is kind of how things change over the
course of a story. You'll hear like character
arcs and stuff like that. An internal arc is something that the character
is dealing with internally. You know, if they're trying
to get over something, if they have abused, that need to be changed. If they have worldviews
that need updating, things that are going on inside their head or inside their
heart isn't internal arc. And then the external arc is
essentially the main plot. So what they're dealing
with outside of themselves. So for the internal arc, where my main character, whose name is Marty, she's going to be learning to cope with the death
of her parents. And then her external arc
is going to be figuring out how to stop being
haunted for each point. And we'll go through
and I'll write down what's happening in the internal art there and also what's happening in
the external arc. Again, if I had like
a relationship, I would do that as well. So for the first plot point, we're going to be, she's
going to be moving. Trying to be strong about
her parents deaths, to realizing it's harder
than she thought. And then externally, the
haunting is going to become more obvious
and or aggressive. So basically it's going
to become something she could not ignore anymore. Let's see for the midpoint, perhaps she decides to embrace the ghost stuff and see if
she can contact her parents. Okay. And then experimentally, perhaps the Han teens
reached a point where she feels she needs help from
someone, perhaps a teacher. And then second plot
point is where we move from two into act three. No, it's not the climax. It's before that. It's sometimes called the dark moment or the black moment. It's basically where your
character is at their lowest and they're
about to start their, their path to the final
confrontation in the climax. So let's see. So let's say she realizes her parents are gone and she's not
going to get some bad. And then on the ghost print
will have her realize that the ghost has been trying to
protect her this whole time. Okay. So as you can see, this is pretty general. I don't need a lot of details. When I do my outlining. I basically just need to
know what is generally happening when which
fixes my pacing issues. I find that it's
actually better for me to not go into too much detail. Because the stuff I
come up with, well, I'm writing as long as I'm
staying in the general form of the outline tends to be
better than if I tried to like spit it all
out before I start. So I my outlines are always pretty general and
it works just fine for me. Now, you may find you
need more information, but go ahead and do this
first and see how it feels to you and see
if you feel like you have what you need
to start running. Or if you feel like you need
something more definite. Alright, the second
outline that we're going to go through
is the act outline. This is similar to
the tent pole in that it revolves around
your plot points, but it's more in depth and it
goes through more of them. So in order for the
act outline to work, you need to generally know how long your story
is going to be. So I'm writing a
novella is going to be alone or in a villa at
about 50 thousand words. So I've set up my word counts in the document
to reflect that. And if you're doing
a differently, basically, just adjust your map. So it's like 0 to 10
percent, 10 percent, 10 percent to 25
percent, 25 percent, 25 percent to 50 percent, 50 percent, 50
percent, 75 percent. 75 percent, 75 percent
to 90 percent. 90 percent, and
then 90 percent to a 100 percent. All right. So I'm basically going to do the same thing here
as I did with the 10 poles, except I'm only going
to focus on plot. If you, if your internal arc is. More important to
the overall plot. Or if you feel like
it will help you to have the internal art outlined as completely
as the external arc. Go ahead and do that. I don't typically do that. So I'm not going to do it here. So stage one is your setup. It's basically your introduction to your character in your world. It's not very long,
but it basically, it sets a baseline so that when things start going
differently, It's obvious. So for my learners going
to write at school, it started with classes. And then I will
probably very slowly introduced back story about
how she ended up there. You don't want to
start with backstory. It slows your pacing down. And it's good to do
it in small chunks so that your momentum
doesn't get stagnant. Okay? And then so
turning point number one is your inciting incident. So this is where the first thing happens that introduces
the main plot essentially. So the turning point here, the inciting incident is that she's going to
start to be haunted. And then stage 2, the new situation is
the rest of Act 1. So it's basically your
character reacting to what happens in the
inciting incident. Right? So we're going to
do more intense. The school is Hong Kong. Hold on. Let's see, at this point
I also want her to have a non paranormal
subplot going. So let's see, maybe she has first confrontation
with school nemesis. Okay, sorry. So more hints at the
school is hunted. And learning begins
to wonder if this was the appropriate course
of action following God against felt. Okay? Okay, so turning
point to here is essentially the same as our first bullet point
from the tent pole. So I'm essentially just going to write the
same thing here. So on pain becomes more
obvious and aggressive. Okay, So we move into the
first half of Act 2 here. At two is really two separate x. In the first step. The first part of
that too is reactive. So your main character is dealing with what
happened in Act 1. And then starting
at the midpoint, it turns into a
proactive section where they're actively making plans and trying to
deal with things. But so this is the
reactive stage of Act 2. Okay, so we're going
to do Mardi take steps to protect herself
from quarantine. And she'll start
to make friends, connect with pictures
so that she's feeling more at home at
the school in general. And I bring this
to the midpoint, which as we talked about, is called the midpoint reversal. And something major
has to happen here. So looking back
up at the temple, we're going to have
her reach out to a trusted teacher or
help with the ghost. Basically start to
admit to yourself that she can't do this on her own. Right? Now, this section here, stage 4 is the second half of Act 2 that we were
talking about earlier. Okay. So let's see, whatever start to learn disturbing things
about the school. Such as people disappearing
and runs into issues, trying to contact your parents. Okay. And then TurningPoint
for is that dark moment. Second tent pole we
talked about earlier. So where things have
gone horribly wrong and you begin to wonder how It's going to
become red again. So the realizes she can't
contact your parents, they're gone and realizes that the ghost has been trying to her about something
this whole time. All right, so now we
move into X3 or Stage 5. This is what moves us from
this low moment to the climax. So let's see, shall investigate. Let's do tries to figure out
what the ghost once means. Okay? And then so the climax is
here 90% through the story. So it's the final. And I guess first, okay, well, just get a confrontation
with teacher who is in charge of
the prep room school. Marie. And obviously
she's not I mean, I guess not obviously in her
words hit or miss whether, you know, the main character actually gets eaten
by whatever or not. But I'm not going to
have her getting eaten. I'm going to have her, Linda, have her be triumphant. Let's see, and changes
the pack so that sacrifices are no longer needed. Alright, and then the
resolution is basically the aftermath of the climax. So dealing with whatever changes have come about
because of the climax. So it's a okay, so we'll have Marty
finally begins to grieve for her parents
and helps with ghost, whose name is Alice? On? Okay. All right. Okay, so that's the basics
of the act outline. As I said earlier, I tend to be very general. This is enough for me. I will kind of fine
tune things as I go on. But this is enough for
me to get started and to go get through
the entire story. Now, I will say that outlines
are dynamic documents. A lot of people feel like
you make your outline and then you have to stick
to it no matter what. That's not true. Your outline exists to
help you write your story. If it's not helping
you write your story, then it's not working. And you can change it. You can add more detail if you don't have enough and
you need more to keep going, you can change how
the story is going. If it's not working, it is dynamic, it is changeable. It needs to work for you. Alright? So at this point,
I'm ready to go. You should go through
this process with your story and then kinda
see how you're feeling. If you feel like you
need more detail. Go to my other outlining class. Look at the more complex
outlining systems and kind of work through what
you think you still need. But otherwise, this
is a good kind of middle of the road
outlining technique. You've got your entire story, the basic shape of it. It may not be very complicated, but you can kind of see where you're going from
the very beginning. All right, so next time
we will summarize what we've done throughout
the workshop and wrap everything up.
5. Summary and Wrap-up: All right guys. Thank you for doing my
first workshop with me. Please let me know in
the comments if you found it was a good
format or if you've taken some of my other classes
to let me know how you feel on the workshop versus
the lecture style classes. All right, so here's
what we've done so far. We went through a couple of different story ideas
and expanded them to see which we could turn
into a full story. We went through our idea
files to expand the stories. And then we did background
information or world-building. And then we did more expansion where
we felt like we could outline and we did a temple
outline and act outline. So at this point, you should have an outline that you feel that you
can write a story from. And if you don't feel
like you're a story, feel free to go to the other outlining class
that I did and look at other outlining procedures that feel like they might
be for use to you, especially if you
feel like you need more than what I did. Next step from here
is to start reading. So good luck, and I'll
see you next time.