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1. Introduction: Welcome to story writing, How to write interconnected
short stories, Theory and Workshop. Today, we're going to talk about interconnected short stories
such as what they are, how they're different
from other types of connected stories
such as series, how to connect them, and how you can use them
in your own work. In addition, we'll
be workshopping the connection and
outlining parts, so you can work along with me as I work on my own project. My name is Kit Campbell. I'm a hybrid author,
which means I'm both traditionally
and Indie published. I've also been a
freelance editor, a manager of an Indie press, a book formatter, and a very
occasional cover designer. This class is part of the
writers Motivation series, which is a series of books, workbooks and classes designed
to help writers like you find the processes
that are going to best help you reach
your writing goals. So this class is designed for more experienced authors who would like to try a
new story structure. If you are a new writer or
you've never finished a story, you may find some of the parts of this class a
little bit challenging. It may help to try one of
my other classes first, many of which are designed
for beginner writers. This class is also designed for novelists who want to try
writing short stories, but find the idea of a smaller footprint a
little intimidating or for short story writers
who would like to try something longer but not go
all the way into a novel yet. So at the end of this class, you will have a new skill, a space in which to
try that new skill, and you can add additional
dimensions to your work. The project for
this class will be to put together a plan for an interconnected
short story project. So we will go through selecting goals for those
projects, how to pick, and then picking
connections that will work, and then we will go through how to outline those
stories as well. By the end of the class,
you will understand what interconnected short stories are and how to use them
in your own writing, and you will have a usable
plan that you can use to start writing your own project from. So let's get started.
2. What are Interconnected Short Stories?: First, what is an
interconnected short story? In their simplest description, interconnected short
stories are a selection of short stories that have a thread of connection between them. This connection can be tenuous, perhaps only realized
by the author themselves or run through
every aspect of each story. The connection can be a fun Easter egg or essential to the story or
stories as a whole. We'll talk more about the levels of connection in
a later section. What can you do with
interconnected short stories? Again, we'll go into this in more detail in
the later section. But like many things
with writing, interconnected short
stories can be used for a number of
different purposes, depending on your
personal writing goals. At one end, you can write them for fun to see what you can create over time with no
limits but your imagination. If you've been
writing for a while, you may want to
try something new. Such as exploring new
structures and story forms. They can be helpful
for compiling cohesive short
story collections. And in perhaps
their purest form, you can tell complete stories through interconnected
short stories in a form known as a composite novel or
a short story cycle. You may be asking what separates interconnected
short stories from other interrelated
forms of storytelling, such as series or serials. Length is a major component. Interconnected short stories are in the name, short stories. You can attempt interconnected
novellas or novels, but the form loses some of
its essence in long form. It begins to look like
a series at that point, though it may be unconventional. Interconnected short stories
have their connections, which we'll talk about
more next lesson, but they do not necessarily tell a coherent long form
story, though many do. Those that do tell a complete
story usually do so in a single volume without
the story being spread across multiple
long form works. And often interconnected
short stories are used to explore
aspects of a story, such as the world or
the characters without as much focus on the main
plot, if there is one. Series are almost always
made up of novelas or novels and have a
continuous narrative that is told over
the entire work. Alternately, in the case of a mystery or thriller
or romance series, the series may have a
standalone plot in each book, but a main character
or characters who are followed as
they grow and change. A serial is a single work broken up into
smaller installments. They were especially popular
in the late 1800s and early 1900s when installments were often shared in
newspapers and magazines, and they have seen a
resurgence on the Internet. While each installment might
be short story length, they do not make
sense on their own. And the next section
we'll explore ways to connect
your short stories.
3. Connections: In this lesson, we'll look at potential threads to
connect your short stories. We're going to go and order from the least amount of
connection to the most. First up is genre, which is what tropes and
topics a story covers. I have a class on genre, if you need it, but I would guess most of you
know what genre is. I would also argue that genre is not strong
enough to create interconnected short stories on its own without a second
form of connection. If one wanted to make a
short story collection, where the stories are
otherwise unrelated, genre can be a good connection. After all, most
people don't read collections if the
genres are all over the place with a romance next
to a thriller and so on. Next, we have theme.
Your theme is the main messaging or idea
that runs through your story. It can be essentially anything. Love conquers all.
Be true to yourself. Family is deeper than blood. Most stories have a theme. For connected short stories, you can write a variety
of stories with the same theme or as
variations on that theme. For example, if your theme
is love conquers all, you could write a story
focusing on first love, on an old couple who has
spent 50 years together, on a couple dealing with
the loss of a child. Like genre, theme is
a looser connection. It is a stronger thoroughfare, but again, you could write wildly different stories
with the same theme. However, theme pairs well with some of the other
elements we'll discuss, and you compare them with all the stories
having the same theme or having a larger arcing theme that runs through all
the stories together. Our next element is characters. For the sake of
interconnected short stories, using a single character or a collective are both
options available to you. Characters are the people
who inhabit the world. I used quotations
because they don't have to be people in
the traditional sense. Animals, magical beings, sometimes even buildings and
settings can be characters. A single character
connection might be taking a character and writing stories about various
points in their life. When they fell out of a
tree when they were five, when they got their best friend, their dog, when they were eight. When they found out they were the prophesized child
when they were 11, their first love, college, marriage, defeating the Dark
Lord, you get the point. You may also see a series of
short stories that each have the same character like Agatha Christie's
Miss Marple stories. These don't focus on the
character themselves so much as use them as the connection between stories of
the same genre. As for collective characters, these are often paired with some other connections that
we'll talk about shortly, such as a place or an event. You might focus each story on a different character who
lives in the same town or jump around a cruise ship or focus on a single family
throughout the generations. Our next connection is place, which is a location that has relevance to the
story or stories. This is different than a
setting because the place that is the connection does not have to be the place
the story is happening. So it can be. Our
place connection may be that the
main characters of each story grew up in
the same town or that everyone had something
in their backgrounds happen in the same place, which is influencing the
present of the story. But it can also be a town
that all the stories take place in or showing those
influential events. If you're writing a
short story cycle or a composite novel, place is often a
common connection used to connect all
the stories together. Next, we have events and
objects as connections. These can be easily
combined with other connections such
as place or character. In the cases of
interconnected stories, an event is something that will permeate each
individual short story. For a broad example, if our
event is World War two, we could write a
story from the point of view of a farmer in France, a resistance fighter, an allied soldier trapped
behind enemy lines, a Nazi soldier starting
to have second thoughts, a Jewish person
trapped in Germany. To add to the connections, we could take all these people and put them in a specific city. And from there, you could
also add in a theme like, say, always do what is right. To use an example of a
published composite novel, let's look at how high we go in the dark by Sakoya Nagamatsu. The central event that sits at the heart of each of
the short stories making up the larger novel is
a climate induced pandemic. Now, an object in the case
of interconnected stories might be a cursed amulet that falls into a
variety of hands, with each story being about a
new owner or a magic sword, a statue, a work of art. The object and the
event may not be the main point of any particular
story in the collection, but is the connection that
runs through all the stories. Next, we have exploration
of a subject or theme. Now, you might say, Kit, how does this differ from the theme we talked
about a little bit ago? We used love conquers all as our example when we
talked about theme. If we were going to do
an exploration instead, we might use love as our core and then
perhaps have a story about first love
and another about toxic love and one
about platonic love. The idea here is
to take one thing and use it to write stories
from different angles. To make the stories
more connected, it's easy to add
in other elements that may be more
obvious to the readers, such as characters,
places or events. Love in a time of war. Families in a town that's grown stagnant. You get the idea. My last connection thread that
we'll talk about is plot. Your plot is the series
of events in your story. What happens from the
start to the finish. Well, this is a more
essential element in many story forms. It's actually one of
the hardest connections to use for interconnected
short stories. Because interconnected
short stories often cover a wide range of
characters and events, the main plot is
often lost behind the content of each
individual story. If you focus on
the plot instead, it starts to morph more
into a traditional novel. Composite novels and
short story cycles do often have a plot that
ties the story together, but more often, it'll
be based on character, place or event with the plot being more
in the background. Now that we've gone through
the threads you can use to create interconnected
short stories, how do you actually
put them into use? Our first step is to decide
what your end goal is. We'll talk more about why
you might want to write interconnected short stories
in the next section, but some connections work
better for different goals. Next, we pick our
connection or connections. As we've discussed, connections work well together and it's possible to use multiple in a single project or
stick to just one. Once we know our goals and
how we want to achieve them, it's time to outline
your stories. And I do highly
recommend outlining. Depending on your goals
and your connection, it can be difficult to
make sure each story does what it needs to do without
some sort of pre planning. That being said, there are some situations where you would be able to skip this step. Again, we'll touch on
this in the next section. After you know what you're writing, go ahead
and write them. And then edit them taking care that they're doing what they're meant to
for your vision. It can help to read the
stories in the order they go in to make sure they
make sense in context, and the thread that
you're following makes logical sense as you go. Once the stories are good to go, you're free to do with
them what you will, whether that's using them for your own education and enjoyment
or pursuing publication. And our next section
we'll talk about why we might want to write
interconnected short stories.
4. Why Connect Stories?: In this section, we'll
talk about why we might want to write
interconnected short stories. Our first reason is world building and
character development. World Building is a term that
is often associated with speculative fiction like
fantasy and science fiction, but really all genres
use some world building, even if it's just
establishing that a story takes place in a real
place in the modern day. You can use interconnected short stories to explore your world so that you can know it better and the same with
your characters. For instance, you can explore Interesting
locations, cultural habits, historical events, mythology,
character backstory, such as why they are
the way they are, and side character motivations. Well, this can be
interesting on its own. For example, imagine
if you will, an atlas of a fictional
world told in short stories or a character's
life told in small bits. This can also be useful for
more traditional projects. I've used this for
years to explore and add depth to my fantasy novels. Stories of important
meetings between characters that happened
before the main narrative, important events in
characters' lives that happened off screen, even some scenes that
do exist in the book, but from other characters
points of view. These exercises allow me
to know my characters and my world much deeper than I
would be able to otherwise, which allows me to translate that depth into
the main stories. Another reason why
you may want to write interconnected short
stories will be to create additional content for
stories that already exist. If you're an Indie author, you may want to
create reader magnets to go along with your
novels or novellas. Traditionally published
authors can also do this, but it tends to be
expected in Indie spaces. Readers love getting
more information about worlds and
characters they enjoy. Think of all the classic books, movies and TV shows
that get spin offs, retellings, and modern revamps. There's no reason you can't do that with your
own works as well. Reader magnets and other shorts can be used for a
variety of purposes. You can offer one when
someone signs up for your newsletter
or as a thank you to your loyal blog subscribers. Or you can put them
in the back of novels as an incentive to get
someone to buy the book. One of the most common
reason people write interconnected short
stories is because they hope to tell a larger
story through the medium. Novel length works of interconnected short stories are called composite novels or short story cycles and often have a tangible
connection that connects each of the stories
into a semi cohesive whole. The connections
you see most often these works are
places and events. Examples of composite
novels include Cloud Atlas, I Robot, the Martian Chronicles, the Red Garden, and
Olive Kitterige. As we discussed in the
connection section, you can also use
interconnected short stories for a short story collection. The stories in these
collections are often only related through
a single connection, which is often something more nebulous like genre or theme. Short story collections do not necessarily need to have their
stories connected at all, though they feel more cohesive
to the reader if they do. And lastly, sometimes it's
just fun to try something new. I know that while
nano mo existed. I often use the event to try something out of
my comfort range, new genres, new structures,
different points of view. Nobody wants to only
crochet scarves, and sometimes we as authors want to write
something a little more complicated or
different from what we typically do, and that's fine. Our next section will be one of our workshop sections where we'll talk about
choosing connections.
5. Connections Workshop: Hello. This is the first of the workshop sessions
for this class. And this one we'll be looking at the connection specifically, such as how we pick which
connections we want to use, and then kind of
how we get them set up for actually
writing those stories. So I find that the interconnected
short story projects kind of fall into
two distinct groups. The first of which
is exploration, and then the second
of which is if you're trying to do a composite
novel or a short story cycle, where the idea is
that at the end, you're going to kind of have a more or less
cohesive narrative. But on the exploration side, you have exploration
of character, of place, of theme. And then if you're looking
at doing a composite novel, you kind of have to
have some sort of arc that goes through
all the stories to create that more
cohesive whole. So first thing is to pick
your goal for your project. So for me, I'm going
to take a world that I have worked in for
probably two decades. It's a secondary fantasy world. I have a epic fantasy
trilogy I've written in it and a stand alone
kind of coming of age. Why a novel that I've
written as well. And that's going to be my focus, this world and
specifically a kind of sentient forest that occupies the northern part of
the main continent. So I said in the theory
part that I have used interconnected short
stories for years to kind of explore the stories. And I have done that for
these stories as well, but I've really focused
on the characters, you know, what did this
character do as a child? How did these characters meet? What is the antagonist
thinking? What is their plan? I've used it more for character
development and character fleshing out than setting development, if
that makes sense. I've reached the point where I'm looking to get those four novels that I've written
out into the world, and how can I help my chances. How can I invite readers
into the world in new ways? So that's kind of my goal is to write short
stories that take place in this sentient
forest that I have created, not necessarily
related to the novels, not the same characters, not the same time period, not even necessarily the
same areas of that forest, but to use that forest
as my connection. And then the point is not to have a cohesive
storyline or anything. It's really an
exploration of the place. And I'm also toying with potentially adding theme
into those stories. And if I do that, I
think the theme I will use is be true to yourself, which is a nice broad theme that I can get a lot
of mileage out of. So where the short stories
I've previously rented connected to this have been more for myself,
you know, short, 500 to 2000 word vignettes almost the goal here is to write complete short stories that I could
potentially publish in, like, a magazine
or an anthology. So that's my goal, a series of short stories that is connected to this world that I've already created with the
hope of publication. That's my goal. And then
as we talked about, the connections that
I'm going to use is place and then also
potentially theme. Now, your goals will
probably be different and your connections
will look different, as well, based on
what you want to do. If you are looking to
do a composite novel, for example, you might
look at, you know, an event that you
can travel along the entire timeline with different characters or
perhaps a town to show I mean, towns you can do so
much with you can focus on the types
of people who live there or the timeline of the town or any number
of things really. But with the composite novel, if that's what you want to do, you do need to make sure
that your connection is fairly strong between
all the stories. After we have picked our goal and we have
picked our connections, the next thing
that we need to do is look at the entire
shape of the project. And with an exploration goal, this is less important, but it's more important
the more structure the connections and
the goal has to have so one thing to consider here is how
many short stories do you need to
accomplish your goal? With a lot of exploration goals, you can kind of do as
many as few as you want. With a composite novel, you have to think
about, you know, what's the final word count
of the entire project and knowing what kind of is the goal for the final length. About how long should
each story be? And do you want fewer long
stories or more short stories, and then how does the transition between the number
of stories you have affect the reading
of the entire work? I know that's a lot to
think about all at once. So what I normally do at this point where I have
selected my goal and I've selected my connections is
to make a planning document, and my planning document starts out as just
a list of ideas. And it's basically any idea that could potentially be put into one of
these short stories. So we've been kind of staring at my planning document
for this project. Right now, it is a list of bullet points of
random story ideas. And I also have a Pintrisbard that I have
made to go along with this. And again, this is just
basically anything that kind of pinged my muse
as I was looking at it has gone onto
this Pintrisbard. Now, I've already done this
for this story for myself. If you feel the need to do this, this would be the
time to do it before you really are focusing down on which stories are
going to be about what and how long they're going to be and how many
you need and all that. So when I am putting together these planning documents
where it's literally just, like, a list of stuff, I have idea documents where I put things as they
catch my interest, like little bits of character or dialogue or premises that I'm just finding
out in the world. And I just put
them all together. And then when I need
ideas for stories, I just kind of go
back through them and pull out the ones
that I like and that are relevant to the
current project and transfer them over to
the other document. And then I also
have Pintrisbards that are kind of the same thing. So let's see. I've got writing
prompts, for example, that I'll go through, and then I'll add those onto the
project specific Pintrsbard. I would recommend that you two have some sort of
Ida storage system. And I think I have a class
about that actually, which I will link in
the comments if I do some sort of Ida storage systems so that when you come across
things that interest you, you can just put them
somewhere and then you can find them again later when
you need them for something. So I use Google Docs, which I know you don't
have to tell me. And Pintris which, again,
you don't have to use those. You can use whatever you
like, whatever works for you. So to wrap up, at this point, you should do the following
if you have not already. One, pick your project goal. Two, pick your connections. Three, figure out
the basic shape of your overall project, and then four, gather ideas if necessary and place them into a central
planning document. We'll also revisit
these steps when we talk about the project
later on in the class. And the next section we'll do another workshop section
where we will talk about how to figure out how long your story should be
and work on outlining. See you there? Pre
6. Outlining Workshop: All right. After
the last workshop, we should have all
done the following. One, we should have picked
our goal for our project, whether we're doing an
exploration project or a more complete
composite novel project. Two, we should have picked which connections we are
going to use for Sad project. Three, we should
have kind of thought about what we wanted the
project to look like overall, and four, we should
have gathered all our ideas into a single
place if we needed to do so. Arguably, I would say, this
is always a good idea to do. You don't necessarily
need to scroll through your idea documents and make a list of random
ideas the way I do. It could be that you
already came into the project kind of knowing
what the story was about, and you could just
write those down. But it is good to
have all your ideas and all your notes in one place. So as we talked
about in last video, I'm going to do an
exploration sort of project focusing on
place and perhaps theme. And I've decided I'm going
to write five stories. If you're doing a
composite novel, you probably need to think
about total word length, which usually falls somewhere
50-100 thousand words depending on your genre. And you will need to take
a minute to kind of think about how you want that to look if you want fewer long stories, if you want more short stories, if you don't really care that the stories are more
or less an equal length, and you'd like a
variety of lengths, if you'd like to revisit
people or places or events or have everyone show up once and then
never seen again. Those are all things
you kind of need to have already thought
about at this point. So the publication process for a composite novel works more
or less like a normal novel, where you would
potentially query to an agent who would then
pitch it to an editor, or you might be able to pitch it directly to an editor
depending on the market. But for exploration
short stories, which usually either get sold at a short story collection or
as single short stories, you would want to do a little
bit of market research. Short story collections are
notoriously hard sells, especially to do traditionally. Generally, they are only
offered to people who either have a large amount
of award winning short stories or with
established novelists. So if that's something
you want to do, you may need to look
into that a little more. If you are planning to publish
the stories individually, it helps to do some
market research. So the website I
use when I'm doing research for markets for short stories is called
The Submission Grinder. It's run by diabolical plots. It's very complete and it's
free, which is helpful. And you can track your
submissions on it like you do with subscription
sites such as Duotrop. You can search by genre, and then you can add in
additional stuff like, you know, if they take reprints
minimum price that they pay, if you know the word count of your stories, you
would put it in here. So what I did to make
my list of markets for this project is just
search fantasy, the genre. And this will take
a minute further. Oh, this is a new
market. Hold on. Alright, so it will give
you a list of results. So searching by genre, this is every market that it currently
has on that is open. It's only searching open markets that accept fantasy stories. This one is a new one.
I'm going to open that. Tells you the name of the
press if they're open, and then what
genres they accept. This one takes fantasy, horror, and science fiction, then
what lengths they accept? This one takes flash fiction. This one takes novels and
novellas and novelts. Short story collection. They're publishing books. This one would also
be publishing books. And then how much their
pain per word if they know, and then the average response
time after you submit. So if you go to the individual
page, it shows you, again, the name, a description, submission windows,
if they're not open all the time, genres again. This place is doing
stories that are exactly 100 words giving
you $8 for those. Yeah, so length, what they
are including in that length. So you might see
like one place might say short story and
that is 1,000 to 5,000 words and another
place might say short story and that's
2000 to 6,000 words. So it's specifically what that market is calling
that type of story, and then how much they pay. Then down here, it's got
like Stats on who submitted, green is acceptances,
red is rejections. Purple is pending, so this one doesn't have any because
it looks like it's got distinct reading periods. So anyway, I'm going
to close that. Here's one I've picked as being
applicable to my project. So again, it's the same general
information as on the last one and this one
also has won some awards. So let's go at the top. Now, you can't pick a market purely based off of
what genres it says it accepts because just because something takes fantasy
doesn't mean it takes my kind of
fantasy, for example. Some people only take
urban fantasy or romanticy or things that are not what I'm
working on right now. So only take dark fantasy
or Hora Jason fantasy. So you do need to
look closely at each market and make
sure it actually fits for the project
you are working on. The best way to do that is
to first filter down using the submission grinder and then go to each market's
individual website. So this is beneath
Ceasless skies. They're a secondary
World fantasy magazine, and then you can
potentially read some example stories
to make sure it works for your project. And then you can also look
at their submission page. And the submission
pages are very helpful. It tells you specifically what kind of story
they are looking for as well as things like how long of
a story they accept. If they accept reprints, a lot of ones have
an AI statement now. If they accept
multiple submissions, which is where you send them
more than one story at once, if they accept
simultaneous submissions, which is where you have sent the same story to multiple
markets at the same time, and then things
like which rights are they putting you
under contract for? How much are they paying
and things like that. So I have gone ahead and made a market list
for this project, where I have listed the market, the length of
stories they accept, which genres they accept, the payment and the
submission method, which really comes down to
either some sort of form, which can be one directly on their website that
they run themselves. It can be a third
party form such as Mosca or submittable, or it could be a Google form. Or they take submissions
through email, either with the story in the body of the email
or as an attachment. I've also listed the
websites and then any notes that are applicable that
I need to think about. This one only takes
anonymous submissions, so I would have
to remove my name from the manuscript
when I submit it. This one is not currently open, but would open in June. This one pays a $20
minimum for each story. This one plays in Euros. Anything that is interesting, like this one has a theme. And then so I came up with
35 potential markets. And the ones in green are ones
that I feel are good fits, and then the ones in yellow
are a little more squiggly, perhaps not my first choice when I'm submitting the stories. So this can be
helpful. If you're not sure how long each
story should be, you can kind of see what
the magazines in your genre are accepting and that can help you if you're not sure
on your story length. So for fantasy, a lot of
them go up to, like, 5,000, but some go up to
more, 9,000, 10,000. This one's 22,000 15,000. So I could write longer
stories if I wanted. There's less of a
market for, like, flash fiction, but, like, there are a couple if
I wanted to do that. So it's a good idea to know what length is acceptable in the genre that you are
trying to write. All right. If you have any questions about market research or
anything like that, please ask them in the
comments down below. Let's go back to our
personal documents and work on our next steps. So as I showed you, last video, here are my list of ideas. And I have gone ahead and
down here at the bottom, I have split these bullet points of interesting ideas into
five potential stories. This is not all of them. It's just the ones that
kind of combine together nicely into what I could
see being a story. And it is a mix of
the bullet points and the Pinterest so
the next step after you've divided up
your story ideas into individual stories is to do brainstorming on those stories. And I have already done that because it's kind
of boring to watch, and it took me a while. So feel free to pause the video here and
do that yourself. What the point of
the brainstorming is to go from those ideas, kind of hodgepodge of ideas into working out the
shape of the story, just the general shape of
the story so that you reach a point where you can
outline the story. So I have gone through and picked word counts
for each story. I find it helpful
to kind of know how long I expect a story to go before I start my outlining. We're going to go through two
different outlining methods as part of this workshop. If you're interested in
learning more about outlining, I have two different
outlining classes. One, the outlining
workshop I mentioned before and two a class about different types of outlines if you don't have a method
that you use for yourself. With this first
story, story one, I think it's going to be
shorter about 1,500 words. I'm going to use a method
I call phase outlining, which is basically just taking bullet points
and being like, this happens, then this happens, then this happens, and
then this happens. All the way through,
start to finish. Actually, I'm going to I'm going to bold these
real quick so I can find them later. Okay. So this first story, I
have picked Ribra as a time travel device sitting in the water
to have some peace. And then this Pintrs image, which is kind of a cool cave
with a waterfall in it, looks kind of mystical. My Internet is slow. Alright. So I have my brainstorming. This one gave me a little bit of trouble because I
had the location, of course, because that is the thoroughfare through
all these stories. And I had a premise where the Rivers the time
travel device. But I didn't have a character, so it took me a
minute to kind of go through and figure out what the story was
going to be about. Basically, the story is
going to take place in an older time period when there's different clans are
at war with each other. And the main character
is going to be a healer, who is going to find
someone who is injured in the forest and take care of them because
that's their nature, even though they're a
member of a warring clan, and they're going
to fall in love and be discovered and cast out of their own clan
basically for betraying them. And the way this
society is set up, your clan membership, especially back then,
is so important. And without your clan, without your profession, you
don't really have anything. So this is devastating. And so this person is going to go in search
of this mystical, uh, that's not the right word. Mythological river of time
so they can go back in time, you know, change the past, decide not to save this person
and stay in their clan. And so the story is
going to be they do it. They go back in time. They go back to where
they found this person. But instead of letting them die, they can't, uh they ht go against their
own nature, basically. So even though they have the opportunity to change the past, they don't, because as I said, one of the connections I'm using is the theme to
be true to yourself. And what sort of healer
let someone die, especially someone that
they will care about. So that's the basic
shape of the story. So let's see. Let's start the story where we find
the injured person. And the bullet points
here can be very general. So I'm not planning on this
story being very long. So this will probably
be a series of, like, small vignettes, like, a section where they
find the person, a section where they heal the person maybe a
montage sort of thing. And then, like, a section
where they're found out, a section where they go through the emotions
of being cast out. And then a section where
they go back in time. In the final section. Although, now that
I'm talking it out, maybe I want it to be longer than I initially
thought. All right. So these bullet
points can really be as specific or as
general as you want. Falls in life. Falls in love. If you know your specifics,
write them down. If you need to figure
them out as you go, then the general ones are fine. Yeah, so I'm actually
going to make a note here because we need some sort of motivation for them to
want to change the past, some sort of goal that
they were close to that this action has denied to them. Actually, Drama. Okay. So basically, they've
had a consequence now for nothing because they don't even get
anything out of it. Also, up here, we will need to introduce the
river time concept. It can't come out of nowhere down in the middle of the story. This has to be something that's established at the beginning. Okay. Yeah, so the nice thing
about the phase outlining is you can basically
go back and forth, you know, as you think
of stuff earlier, you can add more stuff in. You can flesh out your
bullet points as you go. There's a lot of
flexibility to this method. All right. So this is a
very simple outlining form. It doesn't give me
a lot of specifics, but it gets the job done. And it's good for
shorter stories. I use this method for
anything less than about 5,000 words. All right. And then for story two,
let's close that one. For story two, you got to stop doing that.
Click on this part. Okay, so story two, the
story ideas I used to build this story and then my soul saw you
and kind of went, Oh, there you are. I've been looking for you. And then the idea of
a shield character, a character whose main purpose is to protect someone else. And then I also
included these ones. So here's a character, potentially, and then pretending I don't love you behaviors. And I prompt write about soul mates who
refused to be together. So I'm not a huge
romance writer myself, but I do sometimes like to have it be a major
subplot in my stories. So for my brainstorming, I was kind of like, Why? Why would people in
love not be together? And what I basically
came up with is that they have to have some sort of core
ideological disagreement. So I ended up with a
priestess character who was going to want peace and not want the clans to war with each other and
essentially a soldier. So there is my
ideological clash. And basically,
they were in love. They had this disagreement. Soldier went off to war, and they essentially
lost contact. But in this culture,
everyone bonds for life. So it's hard to move
on to other people. Plus, I am unsure
if the priestesses, no, I take that back. The priestesses
can bond actually. Alright, so that's
the core conflict. And then the idea like the plot of the story would be that this soldier
character is assigned to protect this
priestess character on some sort of journey and they have to learn to trust each
other again and let past disagreements
go and get through this mission and then
potentially end on a positive beat where perhaps the relationship
can go somewhere again. All right. So I foresee this being
a longer story because I need to have time for the
relationship to build up. I've used my other main
outlining technique here. Well, I
haven't used it yet. I've set it up, which
is a six act six Act. It's really three
acts, but kind of broken down a little
more than usual, where you have sections that build up to major plot points. So you can see
stage one is setup. Turning 0.1 is opportunity. This is essentially
the inciting incident, stage two, new situation. Turning 0.2, change of
plans. And so forth. I'm not going to read these
all to you. You can read. I've also made note of up here, I need an internal arc
and an external arc. What I do need to
do now is decide, first of all, how many
viewpoints am I doing? Probably just one because
it's a short story. Then which viewpoint? Because I don't know my arcs
until I know my characters. I am leaning towards doing the soldier character as
the viewpoint character, though, because he
or she actually. Well, I suppose a priestess
by default has to be female. Still could be a she.
Anyway, the soldier character perhaps as a
more interesting story, more interesting arc. So I think I will do them
as the viewpoint character. So I will make a note of that. We'll figure out genders later. Their internal arc is learning to be more than just
a shield slash sword. The external arc is they've
got to did I decide where I wanted them to go Sacred Place. Okay. So the external
arc is to get the priestess someplace
safely and back again. So of course, you should
have an internal and an external arc and
basically any story. The shorter the story, the
less complicated you can get, especially for a
long short story, you can put in an internal
arc to give it to more depth. All right. So the way this
method works involves math. So I picked 7,500 words as
my goal for this story. So then this is essentially 10%. This is 25%. This is half, this is 75%, and this is 90%. If you need to do the
math for yourself, I used a calculator because
this number is madness. And of course, you
don't have to be exact. I don't have to have
my turning point exactly at 750 words, especially because it's not
going to be a single word. It's kind of a
guideline, you know? About this point, this happens. About this point, this happens. And I find this very
helpful for me because my pacing is not always as instinctive as
I would like it to be. And so this helps me know, Okay, I need to be at this point at this time to make the
story flow correctly. So if you also have pacing
issues, this is amazing. Alright, so stage
one, the setup, this is kind of your here's what the person is doing in their
normal everyday life time. So maybe our soldier character
helps if you can type. This is more, hold on. Alright. So it would be good here to
have some sort of situation that kind of shows off the main character's
personality and makes a good juxtaposition for later when they kind of
have a change of heart. Mm, I may come back
to that point. Alright. Let's see. So soldier and priestess we The important thing
to note about outlining is that they
are live documents. You don't have to outline and
then stick to that outline. So if you outline a
point and then later on, you're like, Oh, this
works so much better, go ahead and change the outline. The point of the outline is
to help you write the story. And if you need to
change it to help you help write the story,
then change it. Sometimes it's also helpful, if you're not quite sure
what the shape of the story should look like to jump
around on your points here. So, like, Well, let's see. All right. So I'm
actually going to jump ahead to the climax
and then build backwards. The internal arc is
this character learning that they don't
always have to fight and also to trust this
other person that maybe there's something
to their viewpoint that they can learn from. So the climax here needs
to be something where they go to fight
and then decide not to because of this journey. You can see how
specific I'm being. Something attacks. But again, you can write your first draft
of the outline and then go back and modify it, expand it as you go. Sometimes just getting the
basics down will kind of jog your creative juices
and get things flowing, and then it'll be easier
to expand points. So because the main focus of this particular story
is the journey, I don't need to do
the coming back. The getting there can
kind of be the end of the story with the promise
of things to come. Oh, it might help if I
actually look at what's Oh, I did already. Away. Mm hmm. So I would actually say perhaps the internal arc is the more important arc on
this particular story. A lot of times the
internal arc is kind of the background arc. Like, it's important, but what's taking the forefront
is the external arc, the plot, the events that
are happening in the story. But I think with this
kind of story might actually be better
to focus more on the internal arc on the relationship between
the characters and their interpersonal
conflicts and then have the journey itself
be more in the background. It may also be helpful here to have some sort of
backstory where something happened to this
character when they were younger that has made
them ultra protective. And then we can work
through that also. Now, backstory, of course, you don't want to info
dump at any point. You just want hints of it here and there
little tiny bits, bread crumbs to be followed, but not to throw
in people's faces. So technical.
Something happened. Um Okay, I'm going to go through
and finish outlining this, and then we will talk again. Okay. All right. So now I have the basic
flow of this story in here. I can go back
through and make it more detailed now
or I can start to write the story and flesh out the different
points as I move along. It's really up to me. Those are the two
outlining techniques that we are going to go
through in this workshop, the phase outlining
for shorter stories. Literally just this happens, then this happens,
then this happens. Then the six Act Put 0.1 here, which is more detailed
and helps with pacing. So next steps from here. One, write your stories, then read your stories, and then edit them
based on whether or not they are doing what they need to be doing for your project, and then if necessary, move your stories around. The nice thing about
interconnected short stories is that they're really
easy to manipulate, so you know if this story will work better before this story, you can just move it or
if this story needs to be split apart and kind of
broken up, easy to do. In our next video, we will do our project introduction and
the wrap up of the class.
7. Wrap-Up and Project Introduction: We've come to the
project introduction and wrap up section
of the class. In this class, we've discussed interconnected short stories. Interconnected short stories are short stories that have a thread of connection
between them, which can be obvious
and important or can be subtle and perhaps
only known to the author. Possible types of connection include genre or the
tropes a story uses. Theme, a main message
that provides meaning, characters, both individual
or a collective, a place both as a
setting or as an idea, Aan object or event
an exploration of subject or a theme and plot. You can use a single connection or multiple as
fits your purpose. You can use interconnected
short stories for a number of different reasons
such as creating deeper, richer worlds through
world building and or character development. Creating reader incentives by spending more time in the
world's readers love. Creating composite novels
or short story cycles, which are a single novel
length work made up of many stories or just to add a new form into
your writing repertoire. Now that we know what
interconnected stories are, how to make connections, and how to use them, we're going to put our knowledge
to practical use. Feel free to do
these on your own or follow along with the workshop
sections of the class. Our first step is to
identify what our goal is. Are we writing shorts that will be used to make
a larger piece, expanding an existing story or world or just trying
something for fun. Next, choose your
connection or connections. Are you going to use
something more subtle like theme or something more
obvious like place? Then we'll pick how
many stories we intend to write and lastly, we'll outline them using
whatever methods work for you. You're welcome to reference my outlining class
if you would like. I've linked it in the
project description. The supplies we'll need
for this project are a notebook or computer or both, whatever you tend to use
for brainstorming and outlining and an open mind and a willingness
to try something new. Like any new skill, this may not come as
easily the first time through and give yourself
grace and patience. Please post your connection
or connections and the number of stories
you intend to write here in the
project section. You're welcome to post your
outlines as well if you feel comfortable or just a
log line for each story. If you run into any issues, please leave a comment, and I'll come and help
you troubleshoot. After you finished
writing your stories, it would be amazing if you
could come back and share how it went and any lessons you learned or any
issues you ran into. Good luck and happy writing. But