Ben Nielsen

Introduction à Affinity Publisher : Faire un menu à emporter

Hello Marta, thanks so much for sharing your project! It looks like we are only seeing the thumbnail of the project currently, would you mind uploading into the content area of the project as well so we can see the whole thing?

Hi Ben! I hope it works now. Thank you for a great tutorial, I'm hanging around for more, definitely!

Yep I can see it! Looks great! would you like any feedback on it?

sure! I would be very thankful. Sorry for my late reply :)

Awesome, well great work on this. I really like how your prices stand out clearly. There are a few places where I think some more contrast could help though. The first is the teal lines, they get lost at the top and bottom due to lack of contrast, perhaps a different color or thicker lines could help with this. The black text also has good contrast in the lighter areas but poor contrast in the darker areas, this stems from high contrast in the image you are using so you could either fade it out more, try adjusting its placement, or try out a different image. Overall great work!

and I had fun :)
I wanted it to be kind of tacky and bold but I'd still order some onion rings from there :) <img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/be0b9ce1429ffa4ef4ffa9d6e4ff8d8e/8ac1d77e.png 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/be0b9ce1429ffa4ef4ffa9d6e4ff8d8e/8ac1d77e.png 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/be0b9ce1429ffa4ef4ffa9d6e4ff8d8e/8ac1d77e.png" loading="lazy" alt="first steps! - image 1 - student project">

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