Carrie McKenzie

Peindre la pluie et les figures dans un paysage en aquarelle : le parapluie rouge

Nicely done, Donna. I especially like your precise line work, and the delicate tonal value transitions on the characters. 🙂

Hi Donna - well done on completing the class and thank you for sharing your lovely project.  you've got some really nice tones and shading on the umbrella and bag.  Some nice texture on the coat, and her boots. You've done well to keep the tones lighter on the distant figures.  A tiny suggestion would be to wet your paper a bit more next time you paint a sky to encourage the colours to blend a bit more. If you like painting figures, check out my African Sun: Mother and Child class - I've had some great feedback from other students on this one and it has a few different techniques. I look forward to seeing your next painting. best wishesCarrie <a href="https://www.skillshare.com/en/classes/watercolour-people-figures-painting-african-sun-mother-and-child/1912312856/projects?via=teaching" rel="nofollow noreferrer noopener" target="_blank">www.skillshare.com/en/classes/watercolour-people-figures-painting-african-sun-mother-and-child/1912312856/projects?via=teaching</a>

Thank you for your feedback - very helpful. I did find the blending difficult, I need to practice that more! Looking forward to trying your other classes

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