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This is SO fun, thanks for sharing Frankie! I love your inpiration for this project. I honestly really like all of these designs (especially the 2nd), but if you wanted to make some changes;-put more emphasis on the 'jam'; make the 'you're my' smaller. This creates a bit more hierarchy, and makes your composition more dynamic.-I think put the focus on the jam jar alone; and give it more jam jar characteristics (perhaps some strawberries around, add a checkered pattern with red and white, that sort of thing).  I think this might help. Sometimes just taking a break will give you a new perspective too. Good luck &amp; congrats on this awesome project!

Oooh, great feedback! I tried adding strawberries to the label but it looked weird, I like the around idea. Thank you so much 💜

I redid one taking your feedback on board 😁

Thanks for sharing the update; i love it! The strawberries &amp; updated jar really complete the piece. Fantastic work!

Thank you so much for taking the time 1) to respond and 2) to actually give me actionable feedback 💜

Here's my sketch and several versions. I don't LOVE any of them. Any constructive tips are welcome!
I used fonts from font diner as reference :) 
 
EDIT: Reworked one of my images with feedback 
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/8aa4de39.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/8aa4de39.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/8aa4de39.jpg" loading="lazy" alt="Pun Fun - image 1 - student project">
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/b94b3425.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/b94b3425.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/b94b3425.jpg" loading="lazy" alt="Pun Fun - image 2 - student project">
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/de6fb3d3.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/de6fb3d3.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/de6fb3d3.jpg" loading="lazy" alt="Pun Fun - image 3 - student project">
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/bba41184.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/bba41184.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/bba41184.jpg" loading="lazy" alt="Pun Fun - image 4 - student project">
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/d4631898.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/d4631898.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/d4631898.jpg" loading="lazy" alt="Pun Fun - image 5 - student project">

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