Ruth Clowes

Bases du copywriting numérique : tactiques pratiques pour une copie Web claire 

Hi there, Thanks for sharing your before-and-after piece – it’s a strong example of how editing can make copy sharper and more effective. You’ve done a great job of simplifying the structure and language while keeping the core message clear. In the “after” version, your writing feels more focused and easy to follow. You’ve also done a good job of keeping the tone human and conversational, which is essential in copy that’s all about building trust. If you’d like to keep building on these skills, there are other short and practical copywriting classes on my Skillshare profile that might be helpful too. Looking forward to seeing what you work on next. Best wishes, Ruth

<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/49e2732f1c095fc2d801416b3ae5f1b8/8d141063.png 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/49e2732f1c095fc2d801416b3ae5f1b8/8d141063.png 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/49e2732f1c095fc2d801416b3ae5f1b8/8d141063.png" loading="lazy" alt="Linked In Post - image 1 - student project">Hi Ruth,
I hope you are fine. I have edited one of my LinkedIn posts.

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