Len Vlahos

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<p>Thanks for watching my class and submitting a project! </p><br />From the first to the second paragraph, your sentences become admirably more purposeful and vivid, allowing for deeper visuals. And, I enjoyed the alliteration in the second paragraph: "bathes... but bright" and "soft sporadic symphony."<br />Beautiful use of light, temperature, and sound to capture the room. <br />Good job!<br />Thanks again! Len

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