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Composición para artistas: fundamentos del diseño

Hi thanks for your patience! So, good work on the basic sketches with the circles. The 'far away' one in particular I think works very well, that's a really good example of showcasing distance and scale, so that one is good.  The 'lifting heavy' one would probably be a little better if the smaller circle was a little further under the big one, that would make the balance between the two look a little more stable.  With your other set of sketches, you might need to define the shapes a little more as it's a little difficult to see what is happening in some of these.  I can see you're trying to frame things in certain sketches, using the tree and the large branches.  I would say maybe give those concepts another go but looks to make the shapes a little more sophisticated. Just needs a little more clarity. For your assignment sketches, the second sketch is the best of the two, really nice focal point on the water with the trees in the back ground.  With the first sketch, I think you've got the right idea using the tree to frame the image, the water needs to be either slightly further down, or slightly larger in size, or it needs another tree in the bottom left to further frame it.  But overall a nice start here, keep it up.  Let me know if you have any questions about this class! :)

Hello there! Apologies for the delay, work commitments got in the way.  I'll have time to look over your sketches tomorrow and get you feedback then. Appreciate your patience! :)

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