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Composition pour les artistes : fondements de la conception

Thank you for your patience! So, good start overall. I like most of the sketches for the house landscape for the most part. Clear focal points on most of these.  The only ones that could probably use some refinement are the bottom right and the bottom left sketches. Those two have design elements that look a little too close to the canvas border.  The tree in the bottom left in particular is hugging that border a little too closely, especially since you're trying to make that the focal point. I would bring that over to the right a little more, and maybe even make it a little bit smaller in size also. The bottom right is a similar design with a similar size tree, which is fighting a little bit for the viewers attention with the house.  I would probably push that tree off the canvas so it becomes more of a border element allowing for the focus to be firmly on the house.  The others ones are pretty good for the most part, so good start overall!  Keep this up, let me know if you have any questions about this class! :)

Hello Katie, apologies for the lateness in getting back to you, I had a bunch of things suddenly come up last week.  I'll finally have time tomorrow to get you feedback.  So sorry for the delay in response.

Hi Katie!  Thanks for posting your work for these classes. I'll have time tomorrow to look over everything and get you some feedback then. :)

Hey,
First i watched the videos then i did the asignment tasks in order.
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/db7e111e.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/db7e111e.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/db7e111e.jpg" loading="lazy" alt="Composition foundations - image 1 - student project">
with the compositional thumbnail sketches i used circle, square and triangle in various places. Then i did the refrence image thumbnail composition sketches each piece of the refrence images have been made the focal point in various ways.

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