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1. Songwriting 101: How to Write Personal Story Telling Songs : Hi everyone. I'm Bennett and
welcome to Songwriting 11, how to write personal
storytelling songs. Have you ever listened
to a song that felt like it was just playing
a movie in your head? Great storytelling songs
can create characters, places and emotional journeys using nothing but
lyrics and melodies. My name is Bennett.
I'm a singer, songwriter, artist,
and music producer. And if you've taken
my previous courses, you'll already have the
fundamentals of songwriting. In this course, we're
going one step further and focusing specifically
on storytelling. We'll explore how to create
characters and scenes, showing emotion
through detail and structuring a song
around a story. At the end of this
class, hopefully, you'll know how to write
your own story driven song. You don't need to
play an instrument, and you don't need to be the
Taylor Swift of songwriting. You just need an
idea, a notebook, and the willingness
to experiment a little bit. So
let's get started.
2. What Makes A Song A Story?: Hi, Bennett and welcome back
to Songwriting one oh one. How to write personal
storytelling songs. So let's start with
a simple question. What actually makes
a song a story? Narrative songwriting
is essentially telling a story through lyrics. Like a book or a movie,
a story driven song usually gives us a
combination of characters, places, sometimes
conflict and resolutions. Think about songs
like Love Story by Taylor Swift or fast
car by Tracy Chapman. We're not just hearing
someone describe an emotion. We're literally
being taken there. So let's discuss the
four building blocks. So the first block
is characters. Who is this song about? Is it about you? Is it about a lover? Is it about an
enemy, a stranger, a family member, a completely
made up fictional person? The second block is setting. Where is it happening?
Is it in a bedroom? Is it in a car? Is
it a small town? The setting gives the listener somewhere to exist in the story. The fourth block is conflict.
What is going wrong? Maybe it's someone leaving,
relationships falling apart. And the fourth block
is resolution. What changes at the
end? Now, the story doesn't necessarily
need a happy ending. It could end with closure or uncertainty or heartbreak
or realization. Now, your story doesn't
have to be dramatic. It could come from a memory
or something you observed. Conversation you overheard,
a historic event? Think about moments
in your own life that felt like a movie scene. Maybe it was a moment where
you realized someone was leaving a conversation in the
car you had with your mum, a childhood memory, a night you wish you
could go back to. So here's an exercise
I want you to do. Just take 5 minutes and write down a few possible story ideas. Then choose one out of the five and just describe
it in one sentence. And in the next
lesson, we're going to take that one
sentence and turn it into a world that the listener can actually see. I'll
see you next time.
3. Creating Characters & Bringing Scenes To Life: Now that you have
your story idea, let's make it feel real. Now, the first thing we
need is a character. Ask yourself, who are
there? What do they want? What's stopping
them? And how did they feel about
what's happening? No, you don't need to
write an entire biography. Sometimes one to two
specific details can tell us everything
we need to know. Instead of saying,
she's rebellious, show us something that she does. Maybe she dyes her dog's
hair bright green. Maybe she sneaks
out at midnight, maybe she burns her bras. I don't know. Actions
reveal character, and the same thing
applies with emotion. Now, instead of telling
us she was sad, show us what sadness looks like. Like, she traced circles on the table with her
head in her hand. We understand that
emotion a bit more clearly rather than
being told what it is. Now, let's talk about
creating the scene. Where does this all take place? Don't just tell
us we're at home. Give us something specific. What can your character
see? What can your character hear?
What can they taste? What can they feel?
Maybe there's an old photograph on the wall. The washing machine is
going on in the other room. There's the cold takeaway on the kitchen counter
from the night before. Those tiny details make
the song believable. And if you've watched
my previous courses, you've heard this
term before. Sure. Don't tell. This is one of the most useful tools
in songwriting. Instead of, I miss you, try I still have your hoodie. Instead of, I was nervous, try, my hands were shaking. With this, you're allowing
the listener to really feel the emotion within the song rather than just being
told what it is. So here's an exercise
that I want you to do. Take your story that
you've chosen from lesson one and write
one character, one setting, three
sensory details, and one action that
reveals the emotion. And once you have
that, you'll start to have the beginnings
of a real story. And in the next lesson, we're
going to turn that scene into an actual song. So
I'll see you next time.
4. Turning Your Story Into A Song: Got your story. You've got your characters. You've
got your setting. Now let's give the
story a structure. A simple storytelling song
can follow like this. Verse one can be the setup, introducing the character, the setting, and the situation. The chorus can be
the emotional or. So what is the
story really about? What are we experiencing? Verse two can be
the development. What changes? What got worse? What new information do
we need to discover? And the bridge can
be the climax. Is the turning point?
What's the realization? And the final chorus could
be flipped on its head from the original chorus and be What does the character
understand now? Now, you don't have to follow this structure
specifically. Some songs tell a
story chronologically, while others move between
memories and perspectives. The important thing
is something changes. So let's think about
your emotional journey. Ask yourself, Where does
my character start? And where does it
end? Maybe they start hopeful and
end heartbroken. Maybe they start heartbroken
and end up being healed. Maybe they start angry
and end forgiving. Maybe nothing
changes externally, but they understand it
differently at the end. This emotional shift is what
keeps the listener engaged. So let's talk about POV. We should probably decide
who is telling the story. It could be first person, so it's I remember the
night you left. Or it could be third person. She watched him drive away. These are both
optional, by the way. Like, neither of these
are the best one to use. They're just simply different
storytelling tools. Talk about tenses really quick. Think about whether your
story is happening now or happened in the
past or something you imagine will
happen in the future. Past tense can be a bit more
nostalgic and reflective. The present tense can feel immediate and urgent
and future tense can create
anticipation and hope. So try writing one line
from your story in different tenses and
notice how it changes. So here's an exercise
I want you to do. I want you to take
your story and write what happens in Verse one? What is the main emotional
idea in the chorus? What happens in Verse two?
What is the turning point? And where does your
character end up? Once you get this
done, you'll now have a rough skeleton
of your song. And in the next lesson,
we're actually going to write it. I'll see
you in the next lesson.
5. Writing Your Song: Now it's time to put
everything together. Let's start with your story outlined from the
previous lessons. And don't worry about writing
perfect lyrics immediately. Your first goal
is simply getting your story onto the page. So
let's start with the verses. Use your verses to give us the information we
need. Where are we? Who's there? What is happening? And remember to show us
rather than just tell us. Maybe there's a half
finished coffee, an empty side of the bed. These details tell
the story for you. Now let's move on to the chorus. Your chorus should capture the emotional heart of the song. Ask yourself, if someone
heard this chorus, what do I want them
to understand? And I would keep the
central idea quite simple. It could be a phrase,
or it could be a question or even a metaphor. And you don't need to explain the entirety of the
story on the chorus. That's what the verses
are for. Moving on to Verse two, let the
story develop. Maybe the character
discovers something. Maybe we see the same event
from a different perspective. And by the time we
reach the bridge, we should feel
that something has changed. So here's
your projects. I want you to write your
own story driven song now. For this stage, don't worry
about making it perfect. We're not all Taylor
Swift at this point. I want your goal to be at least complete verse one,
chorus, and Verse two. That's all we need to focus on. And then sing what
you've written. Does it sound natural?
Does the story make sense? If you want to go a little bit more in depth of lyric writing, I do have other courses
on my Skillshare, so please check them out. And in the final
lesson, we'll turn your rough draft into
something polished.
6. Editing & Refining Your Song: Oh, you've written your song. Now it's time to edit
it a little bit. Now, remember, your first draft doesn't
need to be perfect. We're not all Taylor Swift
unless of course you are. Anyway, editing isn't about completely changing your song. It's making sure every single
word is doing its job. So let's read through it and cut whatever isn't necessary. Read through your lyrics
and look at the lines that repeat unnecessary
information, feel vague or quite
difficult to understand. Lines that feel
awkward to sing and don't really move
the story forward. Great story writing is often
about saying more with less. For example, instead of saying, I remember we used to
sit on the bench in the park at two in the morning,
and it used to be great. We talked about his
grandma and his mother. You could just
simplify that, too. We talked until sunrise. It's the same idea but
much more concise. Now let's try and
strengthen your imagery. Look for more generic
emotional statements. So instead of I Miss you, let's show what missing
someone looks like. It could be, I wait by
the phone all night. I still have your sweater. I still have all your
presents you gave me. Specific details make
the line memorable. Now, let's check your story. Read the entire song
from beginning to end. Does it make sense? Does
something change within it? Does the emotional
progression feel natural and does each
section add something new? And you don't need to
explain everything. Sometimes leaving a little
bit of space for the listener to interpret the story their
own way is really powerful. So here's a final checklist
before you finish. Does every line serve the story? Are there enough
specific details? Am I showing the emotion
rather than saying it? Does the song have a
clear emotional journey? Does the chorus communicate
the central idea? Do the lyrics feel natural
when they're sung, and have I removed everything
that's unnecessary? And that taken an idea,
turned it into a story. You've created
characters and scenes, you've built a well, and you've turned it into an entire song. And if you have
completed a song, I would absolutely love to
hear it. Please share it. Or at least share your
verses and your choruses, or even just the story ideas themselves. I'd
love to hear them. And thank you so much for
watching this course. I really hope you've
learnt something. So keep writing,
keep experimenting, and most importantly,
keep writing stories. I'll see
you all next time.