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1. Introduction: Hi, I'm Naomi and I'm an author
and it creativity coach. I'm also the founder of writerly play and
society, young inklings. In this class, we're going to be creating
what I consider to be the heart of a
story, a character arc. If you're a writer or any artist that uses story in
your creative work. This class is for you. This class is actually
the second in our design thinking
for writers series. The first is called design
thinking for writers, create a compelling character. So if you don't have
a character idea yet, you might want to
start with that class and then come and
join us for this one. That class will also give you a rundown of design
thinking more generally, because we're going to
build from there in this class at the start
of any creative project, especially one, as long
as writing a novel, it's natural to wonder, is my idea any good? Is it worth investing my
creative time and energy? And when writers use
designed thinking tools, they're able to prototype
their ideas ahead of time. They can gather early
feedback and that allows them to build their way forward
with creative competence. Now, you might be
thinking, wait a second, I do not want to show my
first draft to anyone. That makes a lot of sense. Most writers don't
want to share their messiest first
drops with people. And that's why we are making
prototypes in this class. We're actually going
to make a prototype of a character arc which
makes your ideas visible. It's different to
present a storyboard to someone to get
feedback than it is to present them with pages and pages of text when you show them your ideas and this kind of forum with words and images, you can get the kind of
feedback that focuses on your ideas and how they resonate rather than
on the writing craft. And later, once you're
sure your idea is working and you start
drafting your story, That's the time to bring
in your critique partners. Have them help you with the writing craft
elements of yours. So in this class, we
will be developing a character arc that you can
share with someone else. And it will allow you
to feel confident about the character arc that's at the heart of your story. The character arc on which
you can build your plot. Writing can be hard, especially when
you're feeling alone. In this class, we're here to
have fun together to develop a compelling character arc and to build your creative
competence along the way. Let's get started.
2. How We'll Use Design Thinking: Design thinking is
revolutionary for writers, is because it shifts our
starting place just slightly. So let's take a look at what a typical writing
process might look like. Maybe you have
inspiration strike, and you start rolling in
idea around in your mind. You might test it out
with a friend or to tell them about your idea and
if they're liking it, you think, okay,
I'm going to draft. And you start on
page one and you start putting your
story down on the page, maybe you take a little
bit of time to plan, but basically what
you're trying to do is produce a number of chapters. So that when you have
that number of chapters, you can take it to
your critique group. And they will start to
tell you what they see on the page and what they
don't see on the page. And basically they're
trying to help you fix what's already there. And probably you
are not asking them questions that focus on
your goal for the peace. Not quite yet, because
you might not even know what your intended readers
experience is yet. You might still be
figuring that out. So you continue on, you keep drafting, revising, hearing from your
critique partners, getting feedback as you go. But all about the writing
that's on the page. And by the time you're finished, you send it out to potential
agents and editors. And at that point
they start saying, is this resonating with readers, or is it right for the market? And often they'll say, actually it's just
not quite right. At that point, they're
deciding the ideas that are underneath everything in your
story aren't quite right. This is a very
disappointing result because you've
spent all this time creating this piece that now doesn't work because
of its foundation. So what if instead, you start from a design
thinking point of view? So you get this fun idea, you're getting really
excited about it. You create a vision
for your idea and the kind of
reading experience you want to create with it. Then you talk to a couple of people who are your
potential reader, someone who loves cozy mysteries or who is completely into fantastical worlds
and share with them a little bit about
what you're working on, maybe your character. And once you've tested
your idea a little bit, you've gotten a
sense of what they think and how it's resonating. You can make a few prototypes. You can create a
character sketch, a character arc like we're
doing in this class. Maybe a map, a
storyboard of your plot, and keep testing, make sure
that your ideas are solid. And from there you can
start drafting with creative confidence to know that where you're going
is really working. Along the way. You can
continue to prototype and also share pages with
your critique group. And then once you get to
the end of your project, you're talking to
editors and agents. They may say the same
kinds of things. Maybe they'll say
This doesn't fit for this reason or it does
fit for this reason. But you will always know how to evaluate that feedback is, is what they're asking me to do, moving me towards
the goal that I have, that reader's experience? Or are they taking me off track? And from that point, you have the ownership over designing the experience that
you want for your reader. Whether you publish traditionally
or you self-publish, or you do something in-between. In short, design
thinking gives you ownership over your
creative process, how it goes, whether something is working
or not working for your story and
doesn't ask someone from the outside to tell
you what's right and wrong. It allows you to evaluate
based on your true north. The stages of design
thinking are these. It starts with empathy, which tends to be first
connecting with yourself. And seeing how do I
connect with this idea? Why is it compelling me? That's special to
the writing process, I think because in many design thinking
process is we really do start with
the external user. But I think that as writers, it's very important
that we start with that internal vision first. Then we move into checking
in with potential readers. So empathizing with
those people who would be experiencing our work. From there, we define
what we are trying to do. Then we ideate. So we have our creative
problem and we can think about all of the
possible solutions, maybe far beyond what we
would come up with at first. Then from there, we
can decide on what we want to prototype
and we can test it. And then we start to iterate and make our pieces
better and better. If you took our first design
thinking for writers class, you have already prototyped
and tested a character idea. So this character arc is
a type of iteration we're starting to build
on that character. But you'll also notice that
there are reasons to go back to earlier stages in
the design thinking process. When you are prototyping
and testing, you might circle
back to empathy or you might need to
redefine your goal. And those are all
just natural parts of the creative process. So this step is going to be all about using that design thinking
process and those design thinking mindsets to give
you the creative confidence to start your project with
the solid foundation. In our next video, we will talk about what a character arc
might look like so that we get a big
picture view before we dive into the creation process.
3. What is a Character Arc?: So what is a character arc and what is the difference between a character arc and a plot? What we're going to do is
we are going to design a character arc that shows the internal
workings of the story. So that part of the story that's about the character growing and changing from the first scene through the climax and the end. I think the best way
to unearth that part of your story is to use
the hero's journey. So if you've never heard
of the hero's journey, it is a framework that was
codified by Joseph Campbell. He actually researched stories
from around the world. And he pulled out
elements of story that tended to show up
over and over again. And you'll notice that
on our character arc, we actually don't have all of the stages of the classic
hero's journey because I think that some
of those are not necessary for your
character arc. You can certainly
build them into your plot if you'd like to. But basically the
way that we will look at character arc
is thinking about how your character starts in their ordinary life with a
little bit of restlessness, with a little bit of
something that they need. And then the call to
adventure shows up. So there's something
that enters their life that gives them the opportunity
for something to change. And they might dive in, they might be excited about
that, they might resist. But for the story to move on, something moves them
across the threshold. At that point of the story, we start to see what's at
stake for your character. And then we have a series
of challenges that build upon each other
toward the climax. And then we have a moment where your character is tested
after the climax to see if the changes that they experienced
and the ways that they grew in that climax
moment are actually sticking. Then we move to home again, or that last moment of the
story where we get to see the character
almost echoing what was happening at the
beginning of the story, but seeing how they're
different in their new life. Now, the hero's journey is not really a plot
because you probably need a lot of
complications and scenes and interesting twists and turns to actually
build your plot. But if you have this
underneath that plot, it's like having the
heartbeat underneath the structure that you will eventually build for your plot. So that's why we're going
to start with this. We'll build the storyboard. And as we're building,
we're going to use, we have boxes and lines because
I want you to both draw and write because that
will allow someone to look at your
storyboard and absorb it. If you wrote everything
out in long form text, it would be harder for
someone to quickly view your storyboard
and give you thoughts. What I encourage
you to do is to use very simple drawings when
you fill in these boxes. So it stick figures
are absolutely okay. And in fact, they're great
idea because if you have something that looks like
a rough little sketch that's just showing an idea, then your feedback
partner is much more likely to give you
real feedback, as opposed to looking at a fully rendered
drawing and not wanting to change something about it because it just
looks so beautiful. You could even use circles and squares and triangles
to symbolize your characters if
you're not willing to go all the way to stick figures and use those as a metaphor for what
you're creating as well. Think about it as a round shape, kind and gentle and is a triangular shape maybe a
little bit more antagonistic. And then putting
those characters into a scene or a moment
that helps the person who's looking at your
storyboard understand what's emotionally happening
at that moment of the story. That's what we will be building and that's the overall frame. We're going to start
by identifying that key element that you need to start the
whole character arc, which is, what is
that restlessness? What is that need
that your character has at the beginning
of the story? And we'll do that first
step in the next video.
4. The School of Contrasting Beliefs: To begin a hero's journey, or characters need room to grow. And usually that starts
with some kind of mistaken belief that they have at the beginning
of the story. Sometimes people will
frame this as what is your character need most of
all or want most of all? And I find this question to
be quite a daunting one. Knowing what my
character wants most of all at the beginning of
a story before I know them very well is a
pretty difficult thing for me to figure out. And so I had been
searching for a long time for a tool that would
help me to do that. And we are going to walk through a tool that will allow you to process the steps
between what might my character be
struggling with to having something that you
can build your character? Argon. Madeline Lengel wrote stories have a richness
that go way beyond fact. My writing knows
more than I know. What a writer must do
is listen to her book. It might take you where
you don't expect to go. I agree deeply. I think often when we find something that's going
on for our character, It's something that
either is also going on for us or has gone on
for us in the past. That's one of the
reasons why finding one of these mistaken
beliefs and seeing the possibilities for change can sometimes be hard to nail down. That's why we'll use
this practical tool to create a possible mistaken
belief to build on. I found this tool in a book
called How the way we talk can change the way we
work by Lisa Lascaux, Leahy, and Robert Keegan. This tool was
originally built as an opportunity for
employers to improve work culture and
give their employees ownership over their personal
and professional growth. And that sounds kind of funny. But what ended up happening
was I adapted all of these questions more to think about our characters
personal growth. And I call it the School
of contrasting beliefs. Because what this tool
does is it helps us narrow in on what might be a contrasting beliefs that were holding inside of ourselves
that is limiting us. I love it because
you start through the doorway of complaint, which is a pretty easy
thing for us to tap into. When we get to do is we get to start by letting our character complain for awhile about
their circumstances. For this exercise, I'm going to use a character named Kate. She's in a story that
I'm writing that is temporarily named how
to catch a hob goblin. And the story itself has two main characters,
Kate and coal. And I'll be referencing
both of them through our activities
in this course. But as I start in, I'm going to let her be the one who complains on
this page for us. So what you'll do is
you'll take this question. If you could change one
thing about your life, what would you change? We ask it of our characters and set a timer for maybe
two or 3 min and just put down stream
of consciousness on the page as though
you're writing from your character's
point of view. I'm gonna go ahead
and do that if you'd like to do it with me, you can pause the
video and write for a few moments and then come
back and see the next step. I'll be right back. Alright, so I've taken my time to write
from Kate's point of view and she is complaining about the fact that her
parents don't trust her. She wants more freedom. She knows that she has
magic inside of her. She's since this all of
her life and she's had some experiences
where magic has been drawn to her and her family. And she hasn't known how to
draw upon her own magic to combat the sort of unpredictable and chaotic things that are happening around them. And she wants to
learn how her magic works so that she can protect
herself and her parents. But they are trying to protect her and they don't
believe in magic, they don't believe her. And so she is just complaining about
this lack of freedom, which is a pretty common
thing for kids to feel. But then also that sense of responsibility that
she has and the fact that she doesn't feel
like she has the freedom to do what she knows
that she needs to do. So once I have my
list of complaints, The next question is, what value is being pointed out by this sort of cloud of complaints
that my character has. And we can put that
in this first box. I believe in the importance of what does she believe
in the importance of? Well, she believes in
the importance of people trusting and believing
one another. Now, I can certainly
go back to that. I can think about what elements of that I can flush
that out further, but that gives me
a starting point. So she believes that it's important for people to
trust and believe one another no matter their
age is she doesn't feel like adults should necessarily be able to say that
children can't be trusted because of whatever
reason that they might have. And so then what we
can do looking at this question is asked a difficult question
of our character. And that is, what
am I doing or not doing that's contributing
to my circumstances. So sometimes that
is contributing to the situation that they have with with the
people around them. So in Kate's case, she has this dynamic
going on with their parents where
they're not trusting her and she's rebelling and she is pushing them and that is
creating some challenge, challenges with
their relationship. So she is pushing back,
which is one thing. It's probably not acting particularly mature
or trustworthy. So that could be part of
what's happening here too. But I think also
on a deeper level, she's not trusting her parents. So flip side. She's saying that people should trust and believe
in one another, but she's not trusting her parents on the
other side of things, and she's also not
really trusting anyone. She's only trusting in herself. And so I'm going to put not trusting others
here as well. Okay. So then the next step
is to ask ourselves, when we're asked her character, when you think of
doing otherwise, are you aware of a fear or
worry and what is that fear? If I ask Kate, okay, So if you just
trusted other people, what are you worried about? What would be so bad about that? And her answer comes
to me immediately. Sheath, she thinks
that anytime that she has trusted her
parents to tell them about her beliefs about magic, they have taken her to see a psychologist they
haven't believed, or they've thought that she
is mentally ill and they're worried about her and they
clamped down even harder. So her fear is people will worry that I am not mentally well and will further restrict me. Okay. So now she can
look at this and say, what does that mean? I'm also committed to to
me, when I look at this, I think she's committed to
people believing in her or she's committed to having, having that sense of self where people see
her for who she is, for being seen and heard, for who she really is and
not being misunderstood. So I may also be
committed to being truly understood but seen and
heard and understood. Then the assumption
that I'm making, the assumption I'm making
is if I tell the truth, I will not be understood. I will be potentially disconnected from the
people that I love most. I will be turned away. So the assumption she's
making is if I tell the truth and ask
for what I need. And trust people. They'll abandon me, maybe
abandoned or dismiss me. Okay. So now we have a really strong contrasting
belief for Kate. We know that what she wants, what she thinks she wants
is for people to trust her. And she's kind of
voicing that in the common preteen type of way. She's saying, nobody trusts me, I never get to do anything. All of those things are
coming out of her mouth. But what's underneath
all of this is that she feels that
she actually tells the truth and she
actually trust others with the kind of trust that
she needs to put in them, that she will be abandoned so that deep fear is driving her. I now have this really strong
starting place where I can build the first scene of my character arc
and then build up to a climax that
will hopefully test this particular assumption and see if she can shift her
relationship with it. Now one important
thing I want to say before I move on is that whether you're using this for your character or
using it for yourself, this assumption may
not be entirely false. Sometimes it is partially
true and partially not true. And that's what our
characters need to discover. And we might not know
how our characters will discover it or how
they'll work through it. But by having this idea, we know where we're building
toward in the story. So I've got this for Kate. I'm not going to build
one for coal right now, but I will tell
you that for coal, his issues are more around
feeling like he has to do his job so that
people will love him. He has been tasked with a really important mission and he thinks that if
he does it well, he will finally have a
family where he can belong. So both of them have these
really deep character arcs can develop through the story. Go ahead and finish up
your character arc. I want to show you
actually one tool I've provided for you. First of all, you can share your notes and
ideas on this page. So if you just want
to have some time to think about what this might mean are the implications or write down your questions. And then the final
page is a timeline. I think this is a really helpful one because you can think about where did
this idea begin and what are the key moments
that have contributed to this belief or this fear
that my character has. And think about specific moments that you can identify
and those become a firm foundation for
you as the writer and can even be brought into the
story if you want them to. Alright, so it takes
some time with this. Feel really ready, and
once you are ready, we will move on to our
character arc prototype.
5. Your Character's Ordinary Life: It's time now for us to start building our storyboard
for our characters. So as I mentioned in
the last video, for me, I'm going to work with my two
characters, Kate and coal. And the story is how
to catch a hob goblin. The story includes characters from Midsummer Night's Dream. So we have titanium and
Oberon and puck in the story. And for Kate at the beginning, we have this mistaken belief
of if I trust people, if I tell them the truth, if I request what
I need from them, then at the very least, they might dismiss me
and at the very worst, they might abandon me. She might not be able to put this feeling or this belief
into words at this point. But she is still desperately
guarding her secret because she doesn't want to
have those fears come to be. So in the ordinary life, I know what this
foreseen is because I see in my story when I
started thinking about it, I already knew what that
first moment would be. I could see Kate getting out of a car at a brand new house. They keep moving around
and I knew she would be going into the backyard
following the center of magic. So I'll go ahead
and put Kate here. And remember I said
I'm just going to do stick figure
is nothing really major here because I
just want somebody to see what my character
is doing, right? So I'm just gonna do this
and I'll do Kate's follows. Sense of magic, hopes to secretly discover how to use her hidden powers. Okay, so I've got the beginning. It might ordinary life for Kate. Let's look at what
it is for coal. The first scene that we see, Colin shows him he's actually at a magical tree, so I'll put that there. I'm going to have
Colby a little bit different shape than Kate. It's a little more boxy. And he actually has
really curly hair, so I'm gonna do this, do it ok. And he is a little bit too big
for the tree right there, but he is actually
carrying out his job, which is to guard this tree. There's a cocoon in
it where puck is. And he's promised titanium
that he will be there when PUC hatches on
midsummer night. And that moment will be the time when he can convince
puck to come back into the land of the ferries and ideally solve a
major problem that's going on between Oberon and the others that
are in that world. So coal is guarding the tree and beliefs that
only by doing his job, can he find belonging. Now I just want
to say one thing. If you do not know these
for scenes of your story, you certainly don't have to
put what the exact moment is. You can just identify this
is the heart of the scene. What needs to happen in this
scene is that my character needs to show that they are feeling that they're hiding
their secret or that they are at odds with their best friend or
whatever those things are. And you can draw a more
metaphoric representation of that and come back
and decide how will you show that scene later. So in the next
video, we're gonna move on to the next stage, which is the call to adventure. See you there.
6. A Call to Adventure: Next in your character arc
is the call to adventure. So this is the moment
where your character has the invitation
to start to change. And for Kate, her
secret is hidden. So it's pretty natural that
the call to adventure is going to be that her
secret is revealed. And for this story, what happens for
Kate is that she, I'm gonna just
gonna put Kate here again, just simple shapes. And I just am going to put some magic around her
because what actually happens in this moment is that she uses her
magic against coal. And it's because
he's just use magic against her and she's so angry that she just tossed his magic
right back at him. She doesn't know how she did it. She didn't have any
control over it. And now this stranger
who she definitely doesn't like because he
used his magic against her, is also in this moment with her. And she sees that
he is now holding her secret and can do
anything he wants with it. So Kate's accidentally reveals her magic. Too cool. I'm not sure if I said that this is the first
time that they're meeting, and so this is a really
significant moment for her and it also sets
up the character dynamics between
the two of them. For coal, the call
to adventure is actually the exact same moment. But he is angry at her because she has used
magic against him. And in particular, he
is worried because he's got this whole mission
with the tree at all. And what's concerning here
is that she now is in his world and she is magical
and powerful and he's been trying to control the situation so that when
the hatching happens, he can do his job and having this wild factor or someone else is totally up
ending his plans. So cool fears, Kate will ruin his plans. So that's my call to adventure for both of these
two characters, I want you to think about, what is it for your character, what's inviting your
character to now need to take some new action
for both of my characters. They're not necessarily stepping into a new world or anything. It's not like a doorway or a
magical portal has shown up. But because the
situation has happened, they're both forced into a new, a new normal, a new reality. And from here, they are going to be crossing
the threshold. And the rest of the story is
going to start to unfold, figure out what that
might look like for you and come back for the next video when we think about what does happen
with the characters, step across that threshold.
7. Across the Threshold: So as far as the character arc goes
crossing the threshold, it often looks like a world-building seen it looks like a variety
of things in the plot, but for the character, what it is is the moment
your character really feels the stakes of what's going on in
the story for them. So sometimes if your character
is in a portal fantasy, they might step into a magical
world and they might see the danger of this world and
see the possibility as well. So for me in crossing
the threshold, what I really wanna
do is define what the new normal is for each one
of these two characters. Now that this crisis has
occurred for both of them. So for Kate, when she crosses the threshold,
she comes home, she locks herself in her bathroom and she
tries to figure out, how do I make this magic work. I did it, and I wanna
know how I did it. And so she starts
experimenting and trying to figure out how
to make her magic work and realizes overtime that she can't access it on her own. She's still doesn't have
the capacity to do that. So not only is she
outdid with her magic for this person that she
doesn't really know or trust. But also she doesn't have the capacity to do the same
when she's on her own, so she's very frustrated. So what I'm gonna do
is I'm just going to put this moment of
dejection for kids. It's like I did for coal. Just kinda thinking
about the emotional. The moment. I don't need to
have every single thing. But I'm just going to show how frustrated and
worried that she is. And we'll have Kate tries to use her magic, can't control it. Now, notice that the way
that I have labeled this in my character arc with k trying to use your magic
and she can't control it. That seem could take place
in a lot of different ways. And keeping it vague
and abstract like that for my possible feedback
partner is going to really help because there'll be able to look at
it and connect with the emotion of the moment and not get tied into
the particulars. And later I can decide
what might that look like. Is it just one scenario or is it multiple scenes happened at this moment when
she's trying and trying to use her magic. So moving over to coal. Coal has a pretty
rough moment after he fears that Cates magic
will ruin his plans. Because he heads out to the hob goblin tree
and his great aunt, who's actually a ferry, Alba comes out to see him, put her here and she tells him, kate is likely going to be the person that he needs to
make his mission happen. So he realizes that he might have to trust
Katie All this time. He's thought it was a mission
that was totally his. But all along, his
great aunt and titanium has been talking about him potentially needing
a human helper, and he never knew
about any of that. So cool. Hears that. Others believe he needs
to work with Kate, which sets him up to be in a situation where he
has to struggle with this desire to do
it all himself and potentially to trust her given the dynamics
of the situation. So what I want you to do is think about what your crossing the threshold moment
could look like and also the emotional
weight of that. What is the important thing for your character to feel or
experience at this moment? And remember,
you're not alone in this planning and
ideating process where altogether working
on our character arcs. So you can certainly post your character art sheets
even if you're not finished. If you put them in
the project area, you can actually re-upload your project when
you're entirely done. So I really encourage
you to just put the first page up and let
others give you some feedback. Let me give you some feedback. You can also, in the
questions and commentary, you can note a few things
and asked me a question. I'm happy to
correspond with you, so please feel free to
share what you're doing. Share your questions,
share your wins, and we will all cheer you on and also help you along the way. Alright, so go ahead
finish this first side of your page and
we'll move on to page two in the next video.
8. A Series of Challenges: So we've reached
the murky middle of the story and the heart
of our character. So we are going to look
at challenges 12.3. This is the big part of
the story that builds from crossing the threshold
all the way up to the climax. So obviously this
covers a lot of ground. The reason that I'm having you
look at challenges 12.3 in relation to each other is because as part of
a character arc, it's easier to
think about them as a sequence as opposed
to isolated incidents. So the tool that I
often use when I'm thinking about this
is the stages of learning where you think about a character being an
unconscious incompetence. And then at some point they realize that they
don't know something. And so now they have conscious and competence
and they might be trying to build that
skill or that knowledge. Then they move to a
stage at some point of having conscious
competence, right? So they have built the ability to understand
and also have competence. And then at some point
that knowledge and that skill becomes so ingrained, so well-known that it moves
into unconscious competence. So they are just doing this. They just live this
way in their lives. And so sometimes when
I'm thinking about those sort of big
stages of growth, I can think about that
as a way to start. Now with Kate, as I started
thinking about this, the words that came
to mind for me were understand except and let go. I'm going to actually
write those words here by the challenges. So I can keep myself on track, understand, accept, and let go. So we know the Kate's
challenge is that she doesn't trust anyone or she doesn't trust
people. Very much. Challenge one I think
is going to have to be understanding that in order to understand her
magic and to take steps forward and to thrive in the situation
that she's in. She is going to
have to trust coal. She's already revealed
to her secret to them, so she's going to know
that that's true, but I would imagine She's not
going to fully trust him. She might know she
needs to trust him, but might strike some
kind of deal with herself to only trust
him conditionally. So I'm actually just
going to use a very, a very symbolic thing
here instead of drawing a lot about
so she understands. But I'm going to use the word conditional here and my box. So I'll say Kate knows
she needs to work with coal, but trusts conditionally. She has a whole plan
of how she's going to take things back to her
herself, but she's able. As k begins to accept in
the second challenge, I think what needs to
happen is she needs to trust coal it a new way. So I'm going to represent that
just by showing Kate here behind where coal is and having him kind of
front and center. And that will be a great
way for me just to remember that she's kinda letting him take the lead
in this moment. And that is an act of
acceptance for her. Kate allows cool to take the lead at a crucial, I think it's important
to remember that she won't let him take the
lead for the whole time. It will be a shared responsibility between
the two of them. But at this moment, allowing him to do that is her really taking that
next step for herself. And then finally, the last
challenge is getting to the place for she not only
can trust someone else, but is willing to not hold
onto her magic so tightly. In the climax of the story, I think she probably is going
to have to be willing to potentially sacrifice her magic. And so I think challenge
three is getting to the place where she is willing to hold it with open hands. So actually in the story, at some point, her magic gets trapped in
side of the bird. And so what I'm gonna do
here is I'm just going to draw that little
bird on her hands. And we will just see her holding it and being ready to let it go. Kate's is willing to hold her magic with open hands. Alright, so what I want
you to see here is that I have used pretty
metaphoric moments. I've also not gotten
too deeply into the specifics of how each
one of these scenes will go. And you can see how they're each a little journey of their own with a beginning,
middle, and end. So Kate knows she needs
to work with coal, but trust conditionally,
that's the start of something. And then she's gonna
be trusting him conditionally until at
some point something changes for that child
to where she starts to realize I can just trust
him conditionally. I also have to trust him fully. And then again, we have
another journey to get to the place where she's
willing to hold her magic with open hands. Now, I'm going to actually
work on coal off camera. And I would like for you
to take some time to work on your character and see if you can get them
through challenge 12.3. Okay, have fun, and I'll
see you in a little bit.
9. Wrestling the Dragon: So for very long time called
the climax of the story, wrestling the dragon for me, it makes that moment
really come to life in my imagination of what is my character
needing to do? So there's really this standoff
moment for themselves. And when I think
about Kate, for her, she's having to be willing to hold her magic
with open hands. But I think that
wrestling the dragon is the moment that bird takes
off out of her hands. Now her magic is no
longer with her, and she's truly someone new or different
because it's not there. So for this particular image, I'm just going to show the
bird flying away into the sky. And Kate watches her magic go. And I know in the climax
there will be implications of this and part of her sacrifice can have
plot implications as well. It might help bring the
resolution to pass. But the real important
thing for her in this moment is to
really allow that to happen and to still hold
onto the truth of who she is and to hold onto her
own belief in herself. So Kate watches her magic go, but still has confidence because that's the
other important element of this moment for her. Now, I worked on
coal off camera. His first challenge is also to be willing
to work with Kate, just like it is for her. But then coal faces the
challenge to betray her or no, which he does decide to do
because he really does want to hold onto this
mission of his own. And that leads him into a
downward spiral where he really does believe that
he's got this close. Actually, I don't know
if I've said this. He's half hob goblin
and so he is, He's got this trickster
magic in him. And so he does believe
that there's something mysterious and maybe even a
little bit rotten about him. So for coal in that
third challenge, he is in a downward spiral
where he feels like, once again, he has
done the rotten thing. And he believes this to
be true about himself. He believes that he is
a rotten character. He has hob goblin
magic inside of him, which is very tricky
and Ms. Devious. And so he feels like maybe there's no point in me
making a great decision. So I think for him that
wrestling the dragon moment, that climax moment will be him believing that He might just be a bad person and there's no reason that it matters
what decision he makes, but then he makes the
right decision, the, the, the winning decision, the ethical decision,
the moral decision. Anyway. And he allows himself
to believe that he might be an okay person. So what I'm gonna do, think that in order
to make that choice, he's gonna have to believe
something new about himself. And so I'm just going to put a heart in the middle
of him for this moment and forgot to give
him little shorts. So there is his character
and he's accepting. So I'll say cold, call it accepts that he has both good and bad in him and chooses what
he feels is right. Now you can take your
ideas for the climax and put them into your wrestling the dragon
storyboard box. Keeping in mind that whatever you've built
in your challenge 12.3 will inevitably
lead to this moment. And this moment is where you
have your character face that true emotional
struggle that was identified all the way back when we talked about are
contrasting beliefs. So here's where
their relationship with that particular belief
may shift a little bit, or at least there's the
opportunity for that. Keep in mind that you don't
need to know the particulars of the scene and you don't need to know how it's
going to turn out. So what you're really
trying to figure out is what is the struggle
in this moment? And then later,
you can figure out the particulars of how
the story actually goes. And through the
drafting process, you're likely to make
lots of discoveries. Just like Madeline Lengel said, often our story knows
more than we do. So trust the process, allow yourself to put down what you think is
most important here. And as you go, it will become more
and more clear to you.
10. The Magic Flight: We're nearing the end of
our character arc and we're in the stage
of the magic flight. I think this is a
really fun element of your story because after the climax sometimes
it feels like Okay, now the story is over. But because your character
has gained something, probably something intangible in that experience,
in that encounter, we need to test it to
show the reader if that newfound confidence or internal quality is going to stick in the magic
flight for Kate, the thing that I
need to test is, is she now able to truly
trust how I'm going to set that up for myself
because I really don't know what the parameters are
going to be at this point. I'm just going to put two doors. And I'm going to have
trust or not trust. I will need to figure out what kind of scenario
I can create for her that has these two doorways and she has to choose between. So Kate, Let's choose to trust or not trust. In a high-stakes situation. Now, for coal, it is going to be more about his
sense of self-worth, his sense of belonging. And so it is going to be about reuniting or figuring out what his family is
going to look like. So I'm going to so all
this time he's been hoping that this scenario is going to allow him to earn love. And by the end of it, he's going to
realize that part of it is his decision to make. Who is he going to love, who is he going to trust? So I'm going to go head and
give him two characters here. And I'm actually going to put, there's a number of
characters who could be his family at the
end of the story. And I honestly don't know
how that will all play out. So I'm just putting
these characters here. And I'm going to
have the opportunity later to decide who
he will choose, who he will connect
with as his family. So cool. Realizes, he can choose who his family will be in a more expansive way. Alright? So as you're thinking about the magic flight in your story, I want you to think about what
is it that your character needs to prove to the reader
at this point of the story, what do they need to show
that they have truly grasped, they've truly changed? And that is the scenario you want to set up
so that it really tests it and helps the reader
to see that in action.
11. Home Again: We've made it to the end
of our character arcs. So we have Kate and thinking about how
will she be home again. Now usually with
my character arc, I start this by
thinking about what could be an echo of
the very first scene. So for Kate, she was
looking for magic. She was following
the scent of magic and trying to figure
out how it would work. I think that I want to give Kate some sort
of gift of magic, even if it's a small
amount when she leaves Ferry and comes back
home to her bill home. So I think what I want
her to be doing is using magic in a way that is
helpful and kind to others. So I'm just going to put
key using her magic. But it's going to be smaller. It's going to be a
very small gift as opposed to an overwhelming
amount of magic. Kit uses her magic for the benefit of others, which will demonstrate her
showing some trust as well as thinking a little bit more expansively Vinci was
earlier in the story. And for coal, what I
think I'll do is I will think about how he
has found his family, whatever that family is. But in the very last scene, instead of doing some sort of missions so that
he can earn love. What if he's found
what his role is, what his job is within this
new dynamic that he's in. But now he's not doing
it to prove anything. He's doing it in a more
fully realized way. I don't know what that
job will be for coal, but at the beginning
he was working with the magical tree and
working with titanium. I think what I'll do is I
will put actually, you know, what I'll do is
I'll put him here with some books because
that was one of the things about
his great and all. But she ran a bookstore. And so maybe he is the
keeper of magical books, but not for any specific need. And we'll just put some
books on the shelves. Alright, so we have
coal here and he is carrying out his task of
taking care of the books, but not so that he can earn
anything in particular, but just for the joy of doing
something that he lives. So coal does work. He loves confident that he belongs no matter what. Alright. So I want you to
think about what your final moment
could look like emotionally and put that
into that final box. And remember, it is time for us to share these in
the project area. So a quick word about that. When you put up your
story character arcs into the project
area, you might have one. Or if you are working with
a dual perspective store, you might have to like me. You can just put it in
there and people will fully understand what is going on. You can just put in the images and add in what your
question might be. One crate question is, where does this character
arc resonate with you? What does it remind you of? And as the commenters, as the people who are giving feedback to one another
on our prototypes. I think that
sometimes telling one another's stories
of times when we've experienced something
or when we've read about a character
experiencing something and it
really mattered to us, can help build the
writers understanding of how they can really make
that moment come home. So for instance, if I was giving feedback to myself about this
trust or not trust moment, I might say One moment
when I really learned, when I was really
faced with a trust or not trust moment was this, and this is how it felt to
me and this is what I chose. Those kinds of
little gifts that we give one another of
perspective help the writer to better see the landscape and the scope of what they're writing about. And that allows them
to move forward with their story and add more
emotional reality to it. Not just for how they
feel that experience, but how a wider
circle of people do. So I encourage you
as you're looking at the character arcs in the comments area or
in the projects area. Please feel free to share
your thoughts and comments. We want to encourage
one another. We want to stick to
the questions that people are asking and
give them the kind of feedback that will
keep them excited and motivated to
keep moving forward. So be brave. Post your project. Give some feedback. I will be in there to
give feedback as well, and I'm so excited to
see what you create.
12. What's Next?: Congratulations, you've finished
your character arc and hopefully you've already posted it in the project area and you're getting
feedback from your peers. I can't wait to come and
take a look at what you've worked on and give you
some feedback myself. One of the things
I love most about these design thinking
classes is that of course, we have the practical
result of having great well-thought-out
character arc that we can now build upon. But beyond that, you have built some really important
mindsets and tools that can serve you
in many different ways. I want to return to this
idea of making a prototype. I remember when I first started using templates like
this in my classes, people would say, Oh, I need to fill out a worksheet. And I always resisted that. I always called them
tablets because I didn't want people to think
of them as homework. I really do think it's
important for us to see our creative process as an opportunity to play
and feeling like it's homework in any way is
not at all helpful. But what I realized over time as I started to study
design thinking is that beyond not liking
the word worksheet, what I realized is
that these tools are not just templates or
worksheets, their prototypes. And by that I mean, they are a representation of your ideas that you can show
to someone else. So I hope that you've done
that because that was the whole point of
creating your prototype. You can do that obviously
in the class area, but then also in the real-world, show a few people
and hear what they have to say about
your character arcs. Notice where they lean in, Notice where they
have questions. Those are all great pieces
of information for you. If you're enjoying this
design thinking approach, I want to let you know that
we have been speaking about design thinking and also about drafting on the creative
lift podcast recently. So you could take this
character arc idea and you could take it through the whole
drafting process from page one through the end. What an exciting thing. So if you're ready for that, come over to season five
of creative lift and you can hear more about
how to do that. I also invite you to rate and review this
class that makes a huge difference and
helping other people find the course on the
Skillshare platform. And so I'd be so grateful
for your support in that. We will be following up on
this class with a number of additional design thinking
for writers classes, as well as further writerly play classes
that create these kind of interactive writing experiences
that take you through the process of thinking to
get from point a to point Z. So I hope that you will
come back and join us. You can follow me
on Skillshare to know when the next
class is available. I'm so excited for you to have this character arc
prototype and be able to take your next
steps forward with it. Remember as a design thinker, your bias is to action. So that means you
have a prototype, it's time to test it, to iterate, to build forward, and to see where
your ideas lead you. I'm very excited
to see where that goes and happy creating to you.