Ben Nielsen

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<p>Hi Ria, great to see taking this class! Thanks for sharing your awesome project with us, would you like any feedback on it?</p>

Great, well it looks like you followed the example pretty closely, which is totally fine. But if you are feeling adventurous, I would love to see you do one that expresses your own creativity as well :)
From a technical perspective it looks like there is an alignment issue on the email line, and you probably want to capitalize the M in media. 
On the top line I think there is also an issue of alignment, I think you probably either want to center it with the middle of the text, or make it a line that runs all the way along the bottom. Aligning it with the baseline like you have is ok, but the roundness of the font gives the impression that they are not quite aligned.

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