You Are Sew Beautiful

You Are Sew Beautiful - student project

I am just BARELY starting my hand lettering journey. This is the original phrase I drew about two months ago:You Are Sew Beautiful - image 1 - student project

 

Here is the updated version after taking your classes. I would love ALLLLLL the constructive criticism or tips you can offer. Thank you so much!

You Are Sew Beautiful - image 2 - student project