Kristine Sacdalan

Copywriting para iniciantes: aprenda três estruturas comprovadas para escrever palavras que vendem

Hi Trilok! Great work in submitting your class project :) I hope you found the class insightful and helpful. I have a few tweaks to your copy below. Feel free to check them out.. But great work and just keep practicing and refining your copy. Cheers! :) 4Ps Formula: &gt; PROMISE - Still searching for a vegan skin cream that actually feels like nothing — no grease, no oil, just skin that feels smooth all day? &gt; PICTURE - Just a good amount, and you're set for the day. No sticky feeling, no oily residue — just soft, smooth skin from morning to night. &gt; PROOF - 98.5% of our customers who work in harsh environments, from dusty job sites, freezing cold areas, to heavily air-conditioned spaces, enjoy our product and say it protects their skin. &gt; PUSH - Your skin deserves better than "good enough." Find the nearest Vegan Skincare Centre in your area and book your appointment today. Healthy, glowing skin is one step away... and it's waiting for you.

I tried my best to work on it, im new to this field so yeah check it out
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/e08ea729.png 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/e08ea729.png 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/e08ea729.png" loading="lazy" alt="Tried my best - image 1 - student project">
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/35f0bf36.png 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/35f0bf36.png 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/35f0bf36.png" loading="lazy" alt="Tried my best - image 2 - student project">
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/76f88d73.png 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/76f88d73.png 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/discussion/tmp/76f88d73.png" loading="lazy" alt="Tried my best - image 3 - student project">

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