Jason Rivera

Introdução à composição de músicas: como aprender a compor letra de música

Hello Loic,I’m so glad that you enjoyed the lessons!“Ted” is a very unique piece of music!Nice job using low, mid range and high textures and rhythmic variation (which creates interest). I also liked the piano parts you created. They add the high-end element as well as rhythmic excitement.I also really like the use of the low synth bass tone at around 49 seconds. It was unexpected, which is a good thing!I’m also able to hear a very clear distinction between an “A” section, “B” section and “C” section in your piece. That clarity goes a long way to create structure in your piece.I have another Skillshare course on composing melodies that I think you might be interested in <a target="_blank" rel="noopener external nofollow" href="https://skl.sh/2zB2MXD">skl.sh/2zB2MXD</a>Let me know if you have any questions.Great job! Jason

Thank you very much for the time you spend to listen, read &amp; give feedback to me about the track, I much appreciate it.
Thank you very much!

And yes since I have time I continue to watch &amp; read your lessons who is very useful to me.

For all your time thank you!

You don't talk about what's wrong so if you can help me with telling me what's wrong or need to be check again or need to be work in another direction I much appreciate it 

Thank you for the time you spend to read &amp; reply.

Do you think voice can give another dimension life to that track?

Thank you very much!

Regards

Hi Loic,
 You're most welcome! I'm glad that my classes have been useful for you.
 In terms of orchestration, once the piano part comes in at around 13 seconds you might want to think about developing more of the piano part. Perhaps have it play chord voicing underneath the guitar and bass. I think this could serve to gel the piece together and also might help the piano part feel more organic.
 I think you can also have some dynamic changes throughout the piece. As it is right now, it sounds like the instruments all play at the same dynamic throughout. Maybe have the dynamics change from section to section to help build and create more drama.
 Also, I realize that this is a demo piece, but you might want to record the instruments with live players, if possible, or figure out how to bring a little more looseness and life to the midi parts.
 And I think it would be cool to try to add vocals to it!
 These are only suggestions. I hope these notes are helpful. And let me know if you have any other questions! Jason

Hello, 
thank you for the time you spend to read and reply. 
Analyses of the track sound great again to me I'm not a pro musician so yes I need to humanize midi or find live musician and learn arrangement better and rhythm and how to write vocals at the same time.
Many thanks, I much appreciate your suggestions and since I have time I began to do the change mostly with the dynamics!

Very thank you for the help!

Regards

Loic

Hello Loic,
 You're most welcome. I'm happy to help out!
 Jason

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