Siobhan Twomey

Técnicas avançadas de storyboarding

Hi Sean, thanks for posting your work. I am loving what i'm seeing here in these thumbnails. What stands out the most is the dynamic and dramatic camera angles and shots : the extreme close ups, combined with wide shots and POV shots - all of this is great to see and will make for a really powerful storyboard if you develop this further. I think your next step would be to look at this again and see if you need to add in any more shots to flesh out the action a bit more. For example if we look at the first 3 panels - this is where I'm excited about the different types of shots. You start with a basic set up of three characters, then cut to a really ECU of the eyes, followed by a wonderful POV that also works as a dramatic wide shot. The only thing in this sequence of panels is that I want to be sure we know that the ECU is the Sherrif's eyes (i presume that's correct?) So, all I would suggest is that you add one more panel between 1 and 2 where we see something that motivates him turning to look - you could add a panel directly after 1, showing all three with their heads turned, which bridges very nicely into 2.... That's just my suggestion and i hope it's clear, and gives you an idea of what I mean about fleshing out the action in the next phase. You could also similarly add a panel into the sequence of 6/7/8 to give more visual explanation of who is throwing the diamonds etc... in these shots a POV is always useful as it establishes context for all the characters together. Let me know if you have any questions, can't wait to se your final board :)

Could use some feedback for this rough board. <img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/097520c367a3f2af1dc4c4f61031590c/5451e87f.png 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/097520c367a3f2af1dc4c4f61031590c/5451e87f.png 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/097520c367a3f2af1dc4c4f61031590c/5451e87f.png" loading="lazy" alt="Rough Storyboard (Feedback Needed) - image 1 - student project"><img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/097520c367a3f2af1dc4c4f61031590c/08b4b674.png 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/097520c367a3f2af1dc4c4f61031590c/08b4b674.png 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/097520c367a3f2af1dc4c4f61031590c/08b4b674.png" loading="lazy" alt="Rough Storyboard (Feedback Needed) - image 2 - student project"><img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/097520c367a3f2af1dc4c4f61031590c/2a439c5b.png 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/097520c367a3f2af1dc4c4f61031590c/2a439c5b.png 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/097520c367a3f2af1dc4c4f61031590c/2a439c5b.png" loading="lazy" alt="Rough Storyboard (Feedback Needed) - image 3 - student project"><img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/097520c367a3f2af1dc4c4f61031590c/80d80229.png 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/097520c367a3f2af1dc4c4f61031590c/80d80229.png 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/097520c367a3f2af1dc4c4f61031590c/80d80229.png" loading="lazy" alt="Rough Storyboard (Feedback Needed) - image 4 - student project">

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