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University of NSW Sydney - Study with the world
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Benefits of mine:
- States the word University 'what people would be searching for
- Study with the world is a benefit rather than a feature
- Maximised letter count
- Challenging question
- States a fact (that there are successful people who studied there)
- Call to action - 'Find out today'
Benefits of the original:
It seems more proffessional and less gimicky I think.