Optimised IG profile before and after

I made a few changes to my Instagram profile after taking Ohn Marr's class. My original profile photo had a messy background and was quite dated. I changed it to one with a plain background. I've updated my name to show my full name (though it is long and difficult to pronounce). I used my brand name before, but I feel that it was important to display my full name as well as my brand name. My username is my brand name and now I am wondering what are your thoughts on making this change. I also added that I am an artist and illustrator.
I tweaked my bio a little.
I also replaced the link to the link tree with my three most important links: website, YouTube channel and Skillshare.
I included my bio before and after below for your reference. I would love to hear your opinion (Ohn Marr's and other fellow artists here). Thank you! :)
Jo xx