Mark Cersosimo

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Great video! I loved the shot of him driving his moped through his review mirror. Great find!

This was awesome. Great storytelling, editing, and now I'm going to have more olive oil in my dishes throughout this new year, starting today!

I love Olive Oil! Glad you liked it Dewaine.

Really tells the story. Love the music! Well done.

This video is great !! Really loved how you put it all together !!!

This video is really good! I liked the shots and the movement! Great job!

This video was excellent! It captured my attention all the way through and really made me want olive oil lol. Loved everything about it

That's great! So glad you enjoyed it. I love olive oil. haha. Thanks Patricia

I wanted to watch the video. Actually, the before and after.

Beautiful video! I loved watching it and also enjoyed the background music. It suited the video perfectly!

Thanks for the comment Toni! Really glad you enjoyed it, was fun to make and learn along the way.

Like the rhythm you use to start every next part of the interview in conjunction with the background music

Hey Jerry,

Nice to hear you picked up on that. Thanks for the feedback :)

Cheers, 
Dan

I liked it, very much.  I know that it was nearly 2 minutes long, but honestly, I didn't realize that until others mentioned it.  I had to watch it, twice, to see what they meant.  That means, for me, it was very engaging.

Hi Paul, 

Thanks for the encouraging comments. Glad you enjoyed it and found it engaging! 

Thanks again :)

Dan

I think you did such an excellent job!  Your transitions are really great, the audio is good, the music suits your video really well.  I would recommend cutting it down to 1 min though like Mark advised in his tutorial.  Other than that, this is excellent and I hope to have a first attempt as good as this!

Hi Lys,

Thanks so much for the feedback! Helps alot. Good luck with your filmaking!  :)

Dan

How wonderful! Ah Sicily..... fantastic shots of the landscape, may i ask what equipment you used?

Yes, I love Sicily! Thanks for the feedback. :) actually this was all shot on a Sony HX90V. Which is a pocket camera, so nothing expensive or high end quality. The timelapse was with a GoPro. I used a Rode smartlav microphone plugged into an iPhone to capture the audio for the interview. Cheers!

Great video Daniel-you really used the lessons of the class well. I bet with some work you could tighten it up into a one minute film, it did start to wander a little bit, but I'm sure that's the hardest part! Again, nice work

I really liked the shot in the motorcycle's mirror. Very creative! And the time-lapse of the landscape near the end was stunning. Although, I wasn't crazy about your last shot (the slow pan of that long piece of machinery). I thought it was difficult to tell what the focal point should be, especially since the steel machine visually cuts the frame in half.  You focused a lot on the family aspect of the farm during the video and I think it would have been nice to wrap it up with a candid shot of the family!

Hey Diana. Thanks alot for the feedback! It's a great point you make. I will take note for next time! :)

Hi Guys,
I just finished a little video for an Olive Oil Farm in Sicily. I was volunteering doing the olive harvest and offered to make a video. This is my first attempt at this sort of thing so would appreciate any feedback!
Thanks again for the course Mark.
Daniel
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