Jeremy Mura

Ilustração vetorial para iniciantes

It looks great seeing your new to illustrator. The moon is too close to the border it can draw the eye away I would bring it closer to the rocket or take it out completely. Colour choices need a little work you can see the grey decal/triangle shape conflicts with the background colour it doesn't blend well - you want to keep the rocket in the foreground not the background. Keep the strokes consistent also they are too thin make them thicker. Also make the shading more darker, it need more contrast. I like the rocket well done :).

<img style="margin-left:auto;margin-right:auto;" src="https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=1000,format=auto/uploads/project/ecd9bc9683fe91ff42265ceafaa7584b/9744e03a" alt="My rocket! - image 1 - student project" srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=600,format=auto/uploads/project/ecd9bc9683fe91ff42265ceafaa7584b/9744e03a 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=1000,format=auto/uploads/project/ecd9bc9683fe91ff42265ceafaa7584b/9744e03a 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">I am very new to illustrator and this is one of my first projects and can really use some feedback :)
Thanks, Jeremy!

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