Maja Faber

Crie e publique o seu próprio lookbook de design | Trabalhando no Adobe Indesign e no Illustrator

Hey Sophia! Well done! Thanks for sharing your project. I can't seem to find the look book on Issuu, the link doesn't work for me. The cover looks great :)

Hi Maja! Thank you for letting me know about the link - I had copied it from the menu bar rather than clicking on the 'share' link (which I now realise are different). I hope this new link works now - I'd love your feedback if you have time to take a look :)

Yes it works now. Ok, so some feedback. Overall it looks really great, but as I know you want feedback I'm going to be picky here with you :) First, have a look at the typography on the cover. There's something a little bit off there. What happens if you try to decrease the size a bit on the body text, leave a little room on the sides of it and bring down the thickness a bit (if this is semi-bold, maybe try out regular). Also check the typography of the second paragraph on the first spread, there are a bit much air between the words there.  I'm guessing that you aim to the textile market, as you have mostly textile mockups? That's great in that case. If you aim for a broader audience you could pop in some other product mockups as well. The basics of keeping a layout interesting is to have a variation, for example full spread image, half spread image, smaller images etc. The variation is good, but if you want to make it even better you could try out to bring in some smaller images, maybe a look at some patterns from the collection in smaller size images?... Or something like that. One last comment is that it can feel a little bit heavy when you don't have any air around any of your images, maybe try to make the images a bit smaller or a lot smaller on some pages - also a great way to increase the variation in the layout. Ok, so now you got some really picky comments, as I know you wanted feedback. But this is a great looking look book already as it is :)

Wow, thank you SOOOO much!!! Your points are so helpful - I really appreciate the time you took to provide this detailed feedback! I agree with everything you said and I'm sure that making the changes you suggest will make it so much better. Thank you again!

Here is the link to the Issuu publication of my Ethereal collection Look Book:&nbsp;https://issuu.com/bravesnaildesigns/docs/sophia-van-hees_look-book_ethereal-2
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Thank you for another wonderful class Maja! :)

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