Kyle Aaron Parson

Desenho gráfico prático: Adobe InDesign através dos princípios fundamentais do desenho

I really like your Pizza poster, the contrast and composition really draw the eyes, I would try to see how the pizza picture looks with the edges faded out and also try an organic or food color palette. I also like the Koala cover, excellent composition, though the HERO part took some time to read, but nice overall.

Hey Miguel! Thank you for a comment and feedback! Yes, good hint for some softer more inviting brand will try out something. Thanks for suggestion. Best regards.  Slobodan

Also thank you for the like on my project!

Love these designs Slobodan! The graphic punch of your pizza menu, I'm obsessed. The giant black letter P, with the actual pizza in the middle of it, so cool. The unexpected and playful design for the Koala bear on the T shape looking road sign element is great! Memorable moment to communicate the message.I like the clean layout of your icecream menu, how you used the colors to engage the viewer and create hierarchy, the text wrap is awesome. Can't wait to see more of your work!

Hi Melanie! Thank you for a kind and motivating comment!  I'm grateful to you for taking time to check out details in design.  Best regards.  Slobodan

Slobodan, These are so great!I love how you tried out something different for each design and explored more tools like the text wrap and drop caps. Those were a great touch!The poster you did is definitely eye catching and bold. You really pushed the scale and the contrast looks great. Thanks so much for submitting your amazing project. I have entered your name into the draw for the free Skillshare Membership, Wish you luck!-Kyle

Hello Kyle, 
thank you kindly for your comment, and time for looking into these class projects and feedback.
Course is great, had so much fun doing these projects after lessons.
Any suggestions for improvement are welcome.
Best regards.
Slobodan

To be honest all you designs look great, I am really impressed with your creativity in your Koala Advertisement. 
I like how you decided to put the information into a poster format rather than just a simple document. Your alignment is looking great how ever one thing I would address is making sure information is grouped appropriately. 

Ex. In you koala poster you have the intro and first paragraph together. however I think the 1st paragraph should be grouped with the other paragraphs and you could increase the size of the Intro Underneath the Title. 
The spacing in your ice cream poster where your paragraph 2 moves over feels disconnected since its a larger gap than the previous. You could also play around with increasing the titles and hierarchy(Scale) to really catch peoples attentions.  

Otherwise I think you have done a great job laying out the information, I'm very impressed!

-Kyle

Thank you so much. I am grateful to you for constructive explanations you 
have provided.
Made some changes on design, and placed them under 1st ones
(before and after).
Thank you again.
Slobodan

These adjustments look awesome. That new ice cream title really draws me into your design. And the information grouping creates a better sense of order in the designs overall.  

- Kyle

Thank you Kyle. Looking forward to your next Practical Graphic Design Class. Best regards Slobodan

You're very welcome Slobodan! Thank you so much for being a participant in this class. 
Looking forward to seeing you develop as a designer. 

-Kyle

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