Douglas Butner

Como fazer o estilo livre Rap: ritmo, letras e entrega

<p>Hi Jabari. I can't see your freestyle. Perhaps you didn't include the link? Please pase a Youtube link if you can. I look forward to listening!</p>

Yes I can see it!! It was pretty good! I think rating it isn't going to help you any, so I will tell you what I liked and what I think you can improve. 

I liked your rhythm here. It was so on point at the beginning I thought it was written! You kept it up pretty well throughout. 

You definitely got right back up when you stumbled, and to me, that's the most important thing. So I know you will only get better!!

The delivery was pretty good, thought I know you can get better. I see you have a lot of energy running through you, and you can learn to bring that energy out when you rap as well. You want to let your consciousness fill your entire body when you freestyle, so you can tap into the energy that you have flowing. 


Lyrics were really good at most parts and some places showed room for improvement, but overall good!!! You were definitely genuine, and that's what's important. Lyrics only get better with practice!!  

I think with something like this you can really tap into the spirit of Jesus, his energy, to guide your rapping. Put your focus on your heart, connect it with the love of Jesus, and let it flow through you. Then you won't even have to think of the words. Just bring down Jesus, and let his love flow through you and guide your words and feelings. I know he would love to connect with you like this. 

Rapping with your heart instead of your mind is a surreal experience, and is very very healing to the mind body and spirit. I look forward to seeing your progress, and feel free to upload another video showing your progress after some more practice!

I hope that helps!!
- Douglas

<p><iframe height="480" width="640" sandbox="allow-scripts allow-forms allow-same-origin allow-popups"></iframe><iframe height="480" width="640" sandbox="allow-scripts allow-forms allow-same-origin allow-popups"></iframe>Hey there Douglas. I look forward to you listening to my freestyle here. Rate me on a scale of 1 to 10 and please respond ASAP.</p>


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