We Are Allowed to Stand Still

Hi! I created a short project of about 1 minute featuring 3 voiceover segments. I admit it was made before taking this course, but I would love some feedback on it, if possible.
I didn't follow any structure—everything was done with zero theory and zero knowledge at that time. I had no idea what a story or a hook meant, but thanks to you, I believe I can change this for the better.
I will leave the translation here, from Romanian to English:
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"Nature has its own rhythm, no screens, no notifications."
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"When I take a break from the hustle, I enjoy the moments of peace."
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"It's not an escape, it's a reminder. That no matter how fast the world moves, we are allowed to stand still."
Thank you! 😀