Tips To Writing Memorable Descriptions 1

Quiz
I gave all right answers.
Project (Beginner):
Sam was tired.
Even the taste of bitter black coffee could't keep Sam's eyes from shutting.
The car was old.
The car was covered more in rust then its original color, which we can guess was black.
Grandma liked to avoid the sun.
Grandma would laugh and call herself a vampire, because every time she is in the sun her head starts to hurt.
Project (Intermediate):
The room was always a mess.
Clothes on the floor were dirty and weeks old even though the room appeared lived in.
Gary didn't like dogs.
Every time gary saw a dog his face looked like he had eaten its poop.
The storm was approaching.
Sudddenly it was colder and darker then minutes before, you could almost feel drops of rain.
Project (Advanced):
Tom knew nothing about writing.
Tom boasted he would write a book, but now before paper, he was eating a pen more than writing.
I was sure something unusual was happening down the street.
Down the street it's quieter than usual, even dogs can't be heard.
The irate customer wnated to see the manager.
The customer was grinding her teeth as she hissed for a manager.