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Expressive Watercolor

I'm on the fence with these. What I mean is that I think they're ok, but the techniques shown by @willelliston I don't think I quite mastered. Will's paintings have plenty of white and bright areas and these smooth transitions, and mine...ehhh...I guess I'm overworking it? Feedback please!

I tried these exercises two times, and the second batch shows improvement, but not much. It's all still too dark I think. Not enough white, soft areas.

First Try:

Expressive Watercolor - image 1 - student project

Expressive Watercolor - image 2 - student project

Second Try:

Expressive Watercolor - image 3 - student project

Expressive Watercolor - image 4 - student project