Nao Matsuda

Cuenta tu historia con un método manga

Hello Yaslexis, Thank you for sharing your manga with us. Your story is very easy to follow. And the character designs you've come up with are really interesting too. It must be difficult conveying the characters' feelings to readers because their faces aren't human. Still, the eyes you draw are so well thought out that you've brilliantly succeeded in communicating their emotions.  The protagonist was rushing to buy a cake for his grandmother's party, but fell into a hole on the way and squashed it. But neighbours helped him out, so he ended up having a lovely time with his grandparents after all. Even without dialogue, your artwork alone conveys the story perfectly – it's a really well-drawn manga.  If we were to make it even clearer, perhaps showing the protagonist looking happy in panel ‘I’ would have been good. That would create a stronger contrast with his sadness over squashing the cake, helping readers understand his feelings better.  Keep drawing lots more manga!

A little history for the class<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/a300fa04e95d7747b9d7a2a7a51906eb/0cb5b716.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/a300fa04e95d7747b9d7a2a7a51906eb/0cb5b716.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/a300fa04e95d7747b9d7a2a7a51906eb/0cb5b716.jpg" loading="lazy" alt="Grandmas Party - image 1 - student project"><img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/a300fa04e95d7747b9d7a2a7a51906eb/b5740bfa.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/a300fa04e95d7747b9d7a2a7a51906eb/b5740bfa.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/a300fa04e95d7747b9d7a2a7a51906eb/b5740bfa.jpg" loading="lazy" alt="Grandmas Party - image 2 - student project">

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