Practice video - Best advice you've received

Hi!
I've taken both of your courses and would love some tips on the framing and editing as well. I think in this video I'm a bit too far away from the camera, or too low somehow.
I don't have any experience with vertical video editing but I really want to start using it as a way to get my coverage in front of more people.
Here it is: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/jITn-1bhRos
(It's not letting me add the link in the link tab for some reason)