Milan Glozić

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Hi D, Thanks for posting yet another one of your projects. I really appreciate it and I hope you found the class useful. :)I'm not sure where to start with feedback for this class, there's just too much going on! I'll give you my overview thoughts and would like to hear from you next. What you are most comfortable with when it comes to drawing? What do you think you need to improve upon? With that said, let's start with the feedback. Although we have a one-point perspective in the image I feel it's overall a bit flat. The main reason for this, in my opinion, is the thickness of the lines. Also, dark and light areas of the drawing. Parts that are closer to us should be darker but also have more highlights and more details than the ones that are further away. Parts that are more in the distance should be lighter and have fewer details. One more thing is the vanishing point. Not all objects converge in that spot. This also breaks the perspective of the drawing. Be aware of this when you have such a complicated scene such as this one. I congratulate you on your courage to tackle such a difficult scene but I would suggest that you try something a bit less overwhelming. It takes a lot of planning and work to pull off such a task. It obviously took you a great deal of time and effort to make this drawing, and I can only praise you for it but there's much to improve upon. I see a lot of dedication in your work and I have no doubt that over time you will achieve great work. Just be patient. One step at a time. Looking at all of your projects it's an honor to have you as one of my students. Keep on drawing and having fun with it.

Nice. :) Keep going. Looking forward to seeing more of your work. :) Have a nice day.

Thanks so much for the great feedback. This was a doodle the kept going, and going, and going. :) Next doodle I will remember your great points.

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