The Soccer Mom

For my feralt's triangle, I've decided to run with a short story I had an idea for, taking inspiration from the action movie genre I have a base for what I want this story to be. I look forward to you're feedback and I love criticism! So don't hesitate to set me straight.

BEGINNING:

Beth Mills is a 29-year-old "Soccer mom" with a husband and two kids she'll go above and beyond for. Beth and her husband take the kids to their soccer tournament they've spent all week practicing for, everything is going well until...

INCITING INCIDENT:

Beth is sitting in the bleachers with a dozen of other parents at the park watching the game until the coach walks onto the field and runs away with her kids. Beth and her husband panic and attempt to go after them until four armed men walk onto the field.

The four armed men aim their guns at the bleachers and open fire on all of the parents there, Beth is hit twice in the shoulder, and she blacked out briefly. She woke to the sight of her dead husband and the other parents there.

Beth was in distress but she had no time to grieve since a couple of cop cars pulled up and asked to see her hands, she complied with them and then they arrest her. They drive her to an unmarked location and drag her out on her knees and attempt to kill her.

With their weapons trained on Beth, the unthinkable happens they completely underestimate her as she displays forms of combat never before seen by a woman of her stature. Beth fights off the cops handcuffed and kills them all.

Beth listens in on the cop radios and here that she's wanted and has an "APB" out on her, Beth was framed for the soccer game massacre all while her kids are still missing. All doesn't look well for Beth but her opposition doesn't know the real her.

TRY-FAIL #1:

Beth goes to the minivan that her family came in and opens a secret compartment in the trunk that held lots of guns and ammo. Her next move is to find out who framed her since she believes the same person who has her kids is met with resistance.

TRY-FAIL#2:

The peaceful town that Beth resides in turns into a bloodbath as she shoots her way through every street corner, post office, and supermarket as disguised assassins ambush everywhere. She tries to get answers but is met with gunfire.

TRY-FAIL#3:

Eventually, after lots of violence ensues Beth kills her way through enough assassins to get collective answers from them that she finds out her kids are being held by a person called "Wet-work" at a nearby airport Beth rushes there.

CLIMAX:

Beth makes her way to the airport and is greeted by a small army of mercenaries that she fights her way through. At the head of the army stands a masked person who is "Wet-work" holding her two kids at gunpoint boarding a plane.

The plane takes off Beth makes a hasty boarding and ends up fighting wet-work in a grueling death match, Beth ends up coming on top and killing wet-work. But not before wet-work reveals his identity, which turned out to be her husband.

Resolution:

Beth turns over to her kids and see's that they are both gone and the only thing left was their clothes lying on the floor of the plane. The plane starts to shake violently as Beth makes her way to the cockpit she sees there is no pilot flying the plane.