Initial Pencil Sketch

This is the initial sketch I did for this illustration. I drew it traditionally on 18 x24 paper and then scanned it. I plan to use it as a template to digitally ink and paint. I’m curious about what you think about it, Marzullo. I was conflicted over the proportion of head since they’re probably not anatomically accurate. But it does fit a certain style and might also fit the structure of the drawing since the 3 main sections of the body ---- head, torso and pelvis -- kind of have a symmetry. But I might not know what I’m talking about. Also I should probably make the area between the neck and the right shoulder armor wider.
Do you think it look better like this, with a smaller proportioned head. I also adjusted the size of the right arm and shoulder and provided more space between them and the neck.
