Ben Nielsen

Gestalten einer Retro-Postkarte in Affinity Designer auf dem iPad

Hi Candice, thanks for sharing your project, it looks awesome! Would you like any feedback on it?

Thanks Ben, yes please - always open to feedback :)

Great, well I think you have a really beautiful postcard here. Some feedback though would be to try a version where you simplify the color palette even further. It can be hard but it's worth it to practice trying with just 3 to 5 colors including tints and shades. 
I would also suggest trying an iteration where you lessen the texture. It just comes out very strongly in this current version, which can be a good style but I think it might look good with a little more subtle texture. 
Lastly I think the text could be stronger at the bottom, it kind of gets lost down in the left hand corner and thinking about the user of the postcard they will probably want to know where this beautiful picture came from. 
Overall great work!

Thanks Ben, I agree with all your suggestions :)
I’ll make changes and repost but might not happen for a while, I need a bit of time to get back to it  - I seem to loose interest really quickly unfortunately.  
Thanks again!

This was a fun class, thank you Ben
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/bd373cffa1a40a38622671544859a3b9/55f09f9a.jpeg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/bd373cffa1a40a38622671544859a3b9/55f09f9a.jpeg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/bd373cffa1a40a38622671544859a3b9/55f09f9a.jpeg" loading="lazy" alt="Greetings from Great Ocean Road, Victoria - image 1 - student project">

Greetings from Great Ocean Road, Victoria

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