Kyle Petchock

Les bases du dessin de silhouette - La silhouette féminine

<p>Hey Daisy! Great effort here! Thank you for uploading. Just from looking at your sketch, it looks like the major things that could be improved are the hips, arms, hands, legs, and feet.  With the right leg extending forward a bit means that the hips are tilted to the side, with the hip bone being higher on the left side of the straight extended leg. See if you can define some of the subtle muscle groups in the arms a bit more so they don't look so rigid, and on the left side that line for her upper torso should be hidden behind the line for her bicep, so show the arm overlaps the edge of the torso.  Also definitely practice more with hand gestures so they look more fluid, as well as the feet. The heels of the feet should extend back a bit more and the area by the toes needs to be smaller with less of an incline. Make sure you thin out the lower legs a bit more as well, they look a bit too thick.  One more thing - shift her neck and head to the right a bit more so they're more centered above the torso, and thin the neck out a bit on her right side.  The proportions of her height look solid, and in addition, see if you can push the level of detail a bit further and also practice creating sharper and smoother lines for the final line art. All things considered, excellent work and keep on practicing! You got this! :D</p>

The female figure

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