Erika Lancaster

Façade de bar linéaire et lavé : croquis urbains pour débutants

<p>I enjoyed going through your profile art Claudia.  Your line washes are great!</p>

<p>Claudia, your line and wash bar facade turned out so well! Great work creating a preliminary sketch that shows believable 3D form and perspective. I can see that you drew freehand and this is not easy to do! Even the benches in front of the bar look great, which are challenging because of the planes involved. I can also see that you have a good understanding of one point perspective, as the diagonals in the side planes of the secondary buildings also are effectively drawn. You also developed good line weight variation with your pen and ink. Some lines and marks look lighter in visual weight, and others look heavier. This leads to a more dynamic/interesting outcome. Your watercolor washes are well done, too! I like how you made sure to bring more attention to the bar facade, and less to the buildings on either side, by adding more contrast and detail to this focal point area. Great work, Claudia! If you have any questions at all, please feel free to leave them here and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. Thank you so much for going through this course and for taking the time to share here. It means the world to me and does a lot to help inspire others to post, too. Enjoy your art practice!</p>

Amazing feedback!! I'm just starting this class!

Let us know how it goes, Joanne! Enjoy. :)

Thank you so much for your great and detailed feedback, Erika!! I´m very late, so sorry, but I had to understand the practices / habits here on skillshare. As I am a beginner, it is so nice to hear that my sketch is successful and i am super motivated to continue!!! Thank you!!!!! I had great fun during your class!

Enjoy your practice, Claudia! If you have any questions that I can help out with, feel free to reach out.

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