Jeremy Mura

Jouer et concevoir avec la typographie pour les marques

Thanks Jeremy for the feedback and highlighting those areas. I will refine it.

This looks fun, the colours are bold and standing out to me.Something feels off about the PROTEIN font being there. It's not adding value or communicating you need more information on the bar. Work on your hierarchy of elements.Yumm and Granola fonts work with contrast. THREE PACK I would move somewhere else on the packet.Hope that helps!

<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/9292d8ff1c41408ce4a718c64ef469e0/953e2ff8.png 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/9292d8ff1c41408ce4a718c64ef469e0/953e2ff8.png 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/9292d8ff1c41408ce4a718c64ef469e0/953e2ff8.png" loading="lazy" alt="Yumm Logo & Mockup - image 1 - student project">I designed this granola company logo for a made up brand using two fonts and glyphs, let me know what you think.

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