Keren Elizabeth

Art mural de mots : 4 principes de la conception d'affiches typographiques

Hi Michael! Thanks for taking the class and sharing your work here! I would love to hear your thoughts about your project too, but here are mine... Firstly I think your colour choice is great and ties into the background really well. I would double check your wording and use of punctuation, for instance the comma between 'not' and 'harder' isn't necessary. I like how you have carefully chosen your typefaces and paid great attention to hierarchy, well done! Possibly for the subheading you could re-word to help clarify your message ... ie "Save your future self time, money and energy" - It's good to consider how to both include the viewer and save on reading time/attention. For this subheading I think a more readable typeface in white would work even better, like the one you've used along the bottom. The top heading could do with modifying and cleaning up the outlines/drop shadow, as I think the thick white is a little too contrasty with the blue. But I realise I didn't go into details on how to do this in the class (in a future class I will). I would also reduce the size of each heading so there is more space between the text blocks and border - ie make it at least as much as the leading space. This will give it a bit more breathing room. Your leading and kerning are spot on though. Overall, fantastic work!

Wordy Wall Art: Typographic Poster Project

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