Rebecca Brizi

Service commercial et service client : rédiger une proposition de valeur qui prend en compte le client

This is really great work. You demonstrate a detailed understanding go the client's business problems - not just their website needs - and you highlight the difference they receive when hiring somebody with technical expertise, versus a DIY route. My one comment is for the summary at the bottom: lead with their business problem rather than their web design issues, something more like:"When [CLIENT] face challenges with low audience trust, weak onlinepresence, and reduced conversions, it is often because of a week brand identity and poor web experience. A weak website struggles to create an effective, user-friendly web design that reflectstheir brand identity and drives engagement."Attract their attention from the first line by showing you understand their pains.

Thank you very much for the constructive feedback Madam Rebecca, I am going to implement it right away.

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