Asya Alexandrova

Pratique du croquis du café. Épisode 1 : Les vaisselle

Hi again Lu, thanks for your next project! You're really good with drawing food: your sushi, noodles and cake look very appetizing. The composition here is a bit confusing here. I guess the sushi and the noodles are on the front, and the lamp is on the back. But actually there's no context on your drawing helping me to be sure about it. It could be a line, showing the edge of the table; or maybe a couple of additional lamps, hiding behind the food and making clear that it's a background. Don't be afraid to intersect your objects, it brings more depth to your drawing!Also, I see some mismatch of viewpoints here. We definitely look at the food from above. But the ellipse of sauce plate is narrower than the noodle's ellipse, although noodles are further from us. It should be vice versa: the closer the ellipse is, the wider it seems to be. Then, we look at the lamp from below, the ellipse again helps us to understand this. But it's located on the same level as food! If your combine objects taken from different places on one sketch, try to adjust their viewpoints to make them fit each other. You've done a great job! You already have a great technique, that's why I talk so much about your composition — it's the only thing to improve.

Thank you sooo much for such deteiled and so helpfull feedback. I used pictures from internet to draw so that is why I have problems with composition. This is my week point for now. But I will work on that. Your words are very helpful and I appriciate it. Thank you so much! I learn so much from You!

Thank you for amazing class!
 
First I repeated what you drawn, so I can understand composition and process
 
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/2c2bf9dbd92582af8393351666bf1121/508a165b 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/2c2bf9dbd92582af8393351666bf1121/508a165b 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/2c2bf9dbd92582af8393351666bf1121/508a165b" loading="lazy" alt="Sketch - image 1 - student project">
 
and then I did my sketches
 
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/2c2bf9dbd92582af8393351666bf1121/ff3bed13 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/2c2bf9dbd92582af8393351666bf1121/ff3bed13 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/2c2bf9dbd92582af8393351666bf1121/ff3bed13" loading="lazy" alt="Sketch - image 2 - student project">
 
<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/2c2bf9dbd92582af8393351666bf1121/3c2e8550 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/2c2bf9dbd92582af8393351666bf1121/3c2e8550 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/2c2bf9dbd92582af8393351666bf1121/3c2e8550" loading="lazy" alt="Sketch - image 3 - student project">

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