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Nice analysis Shanara! What I would recommend to you is do it one review per one visualization. Because when you want to do a visual/ graphical analysis and write particular notes to each, there is no room for it :) And One viz can be better than the other one. So for me, the upper visualization could be made with a wider angle. Also, the bricks are very intensive and it looks like prison :) No offence. Also, the silhouette is filled with the sky? So it looks weird. The bottom one. It's better shot and composition. But cars are too detailed and take too much attention. They are not so important as the house. The texture on the house in front is too huge even for the concrete. The glass can reflect some surroundings. The silhouettes are inverted in colour. They are black and the shadows are white? And the shadows have only one silhouette? The second silhouette is in the intersection with the tree, therefore, is hardly readable. Also, there is an effect called "the end of the world" - your grass ends in the sky. I think if this house isn't on the cliff on the lonely place you don't see this effect.:) Hope I didn't hurt you and your next visualizations will be even better! Good luck!

<img srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/0ec60ed61526296f31df7ccd62b42d5f/70ee915c 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/0ec60ed61526296f31df7ccd62b42d5f/70ee915c 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/project/0ec60ed61526296f31df7ccd62b42d5f/70ee915c" loading="lazy" alt="Shahnara Pashayeva - image 1 - student project">visual for the spring semester final project

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