Sean Dykink

Techniques de tournage : les paramètres de l'appareil photo pour raconter des histoires

Beautifully done! Love the movement and transitions with the frying pan. Room for improvement: Too many consecutive close-up shots

I enjoyed your movie. It expresses the title with a bit of a twist. By now I assume what quarantine will look like but you added a few new things that made this interesting. The soundtrack went perfectly with your short film too. Great job all in all.

Hi Vipul, thank you for posting your project! I noticed you posted this project in my other class on editing which is great, I'll try to offer feedback for both in the same reply and copy/paste it in both classes.First off, excellent job! There's a great story here, and I can see so much effort went into this and it's paid off. I don't know exactly what your camera settings were so I cannot speak directly to that but I can say that it does look like an appropriate exposure (those shots in the second half with daylight look fantastic) and consistent motion blur throughout. I'm not sure if you added grain in post, or if that is camera noise, either way, I like the aesthetic and I think it works well with this piece.The colours, look good and you've created a suitable look that makes some of those location shots pop. nice use of greens. I love the sound design you implemented. The ringing alarm ascending and the music fading when you wake up adding to the story and helping create clear communication for what is happening on screen. Also bringing attention to music, and real-world sounds by fading in and out at different points throughout the film helped create some separation between ideas/moments and also helped keep me engaged. My immediate thought on the sound effects would be to try to explore more layers in your sound, perhaps add some risers in there during the alarm, maybe vary the whoosh sounds during the cooking sequence or make each whoosh sound a bit different by layering low and high-frequency whooshes. Also, watch out for some of those hotter sound effects like the shower at 1:37/1:38 and the sip at 1:44/1:45. I know this takes more time but I think considering/trying out these notes can take this to the next level. The music choices were on point, both tracks seemed so different yet both added to the overall tone and helped create different moods throughout the film that took me on a journey, great work!!Overall, I can see you were intentional with your choices and paid attention to the smaller details, and that's added to the story of your edit. Great job Vipul!!

Thank you so much Sean. I'll keep all of this in mind and will implement this in my next project. waiting for more of your classes.

Great to hear Vipul, thank you for posting your project:) I forgot to ask, what did you say in Hindi at the end of your film?

hahaha. SO first I asked my brother if he wanted to eat maggie ( maggie is an instant noodle brand in India) and in the end, it did not turn out as we expected. So we were just saying how mediocre it tasted.

Haha, I like it, and now that transition to cooking makes much more sense to me! Great work Vipul, I hope to see more projects from you in future classes:)

Just tried making a short video of myself during the lockdown here in India. The language&nbsp;I'm speaking&nbsp;in
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the end of the video is Hindi.

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