Aram Atkinson

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I loved this Nuri! So good! You threw me right into the heat of the action and I could imagine the world so clearly. You did an amazing job creating John's passive character with very little dialogue. It's a nice ocmplete story as well in a few short pages, definitely one you could turn into a film (just pack the plasters is all I'm saying!)Thanks for sharing :D

You did an extraordinary job with the tense. I felt like I was back working in a restaurant helping the back of the house set up. By the way, thank you for keeping things separated. I knew who was talking and who wasn't.

A short film script about a kitchen porter trying to navigate the hectic and sometimes scary environment of a restaurant kitchen.
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https://drive.google.com/file/d/1sf8FLEbeX9aGNXiLlto59UxYxHIkvMu3/view?usp=sharing

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