Ellen Lupton

Les bases du design graphique : principes fondamentaux de la conception visuelle

I really enjoy your placement of the elements; the centering of the text on the left in relation to the asymmetry of the right page really balance it out, along with the bleed on the left and the white space on the right. The only suggestion I have is that you try justifying the paragraph text on the left so that it is a clear rectangle (like a frame inside the page itself).

<img src="https://static.skillshare.com/uploads/parentClasses/7614041aa1d6f34d102e53a0ac351154/a36f416b" alt="a36f416b" /> Updated version. I ve lifted up the text on the right page and deleted the indents, while adding more space between paragraphs. Really need to delve more into typography, but l am pleased with the results.  Thank you so much.

Really like the colors of the pictures and presentation.!

Nice layout. I would suggest to make the body copy to be justified left with no indents and more space between paragraphs. Gives the eye a break when reading. Also would fix the type so you're not left with widows at the end.

thank you very much MD for the suggestions


I agree with Carla, move up the text on the right. Great work, nice pictures!!

Looks good! The color choices make me feel the cold. What do you think of lifting the text on the right side of the layout so that the last line of text is in line with the image it is beside?

Hi Carla, thanks for the suggestion, trying it now.

I really enjoyed the class as I enjoyed your manual.This is my very first attempt at a printed magazine layout. I feel there is still a bit of work to do, especially with regards to the vertical alignment. Hopefully I'll have time to work more on this as well as on something less conventional.
Comments or suggestions are much appreciated.
Thank you :)
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My very first magazine layout for print!

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