Teoh Yi Chie

Dessin au stylo, à l'encre et à l'aquarelle pour les débutants

Looks good. There are some issues with perspective. When drawing, before you lay down a line, think of where that line will be in relation to other lines you've already drawn. E.g. Is it to the left, right, it's about same distance away from, half distance, 3/4 distance, etc.I noticed you draw little shapes on the top of the pans with ink. Those are not necessary. Generally speaking, lines are drawn for edges that affect the form. E.g. For a cube, you only draw the edges and not the patterns on the surface of the cube. You can colour the patterns on the surface of the cube, but you shouldn't use lines unless maybe there's a hole or some physical indent on the surface of the cube.

Thanks Teoh. My photo is flawed because the paper is curled up - the real painting is fine for perspective. Thanks for the notes about the shapes on the pans. I tried to represent the indentations/dips in the paint.

I've photographed it again and uploaded it so you can see the correct perspective..

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