Siobhan Twomey

Dessiner pour les storyboards

Hi Amy! It looks great!! This is a wonderful breakdown of the script - very nicely visualized and I think each camera angle works perfectly. I love the high angles at the beginning, setting the scene and drawing us into the story. The middle section keeps us in suspense a bit by having the captain walking across the harbor, it helps to build the sequence. ... In the next phase, I would give some consideration to this part - is the camera going to pan with him as he walks? or is it static shot and he walks out of frame? Just something to consider, we often don't include these tiny details in a thumbnail sequence, but when it comes to the storyboard it's important to know how the shot plays out. Hope this makes sense! Thanks so much for posting this! I'm really excited to see the finished storyboard :) !

Thanks for the early feedback and tips Siobhan! I am also excited to finish up the final storyboard :)

First Take
I got a start on sketching the rough storyboard. I wanted to post my work- in-progress to get any feedback before I continue :) Any feedback on the shots and angles or composition would be helpful.&nbsp;
<img style="margin-left:auto;margin-right:auto;" src="https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=1000,format=auto/uploads/project/367df99600b482e3c28259091bd437ee/84d4e2bf.jpeg" alt="My Storyboard - image 1 - student project" srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=600,format=auto/uploads/project/367df99600b482e3c28259091bd437ee/84d4e2bf.jpeg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=1000,format=auto/uploads/project/367df99600b482e3c28259091bd437ee/84d4e2bf.jpeg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">
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Some more WIP (page 2 &amp; 3).&nbsp; Next, I&nbsp;plan on doing a more cleaned up version&nbsp;describing all of the angles and shots, and using Siobhan's template for uniformity.&nbsp;
&nbsp;<img style="margin-left:auto;margin-right:auto;" src="https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=1000,format=auto/uploads/project/367df99600b482e3c28259091bd437ee/70a43c74.jpg" alt="My Storyboard - image 2 - student project" srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=600,format=auto/uploads/project/367df99600b482e3c28259091bd437ee/70a43c74.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=1000,format=auto/uploads/project/367df99600b482e3c28259091bd437ee/70a43c74.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">
<img style="margin-left:auto;margin-right:auto;" src="https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=1000,format=auto/uploads/project/367df99600b482e3c28259091bd437ee/dfb73b33.jpg" alt="My Storyboard - image 3 - student project" srcset="https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=600,format=auto/uploads/project/367df99600b482e3c28259091bd437ee/dfb73b33.jpg 600w, https://static.skillshare.com/cdn-cgi/image/quality=80,width=1000,format=auto/uploads/project/367df99600b482e3c28259091bd437ee/dfb73b33.jpg 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">
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This has been so fun so far, I really love the process!
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