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Raconter des histoires avec des bandes dessinées 2 : Créez une bande dessinée d'une page.

I love the drawings. It's neat and clear. Plus the tonal values are nicely defined. If I could give some pointers. The reading flow of the comic did make me take a wrong turn. Because the top panel dips down, I read the 1st panel and then the 4th panel. To keep it reading from left to right in a simple way, I recommend keeping the panels in horizontal rows. There is a place to play with unusual arrangements but that comes being familiar with arranging it according to eyeflow first. And one other thing. All the panels are cropped shots, which means there is very little context as to where the character is. To keep these pictures and yet provide enough context, you can add a narration in the first panel that says that your mom is walking your dog or walking around the neighbourhood streets. That paints the scene with words. The other way is to draw the scene where we see the whole character and dog and the background so readers can understand "where" she is. I love that it is a real story. Capturing memories is a good way to taking advantage of the comics medium! Thanks for sharing!

i watched the skillshare class and made this for my daughter. One time on a walk with our dog her mom bit into an apple she found on the ground under the apple trees at the park. She said it was sweet and wanted me to try. There were worm holes in it and all the others near it had worms too!  She is a silly lady, but I love her.

Mama Eats an Apple

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