Carrie McKenzie

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Hi Pennie, well done on completing the class and sharing your lovely project. You've created a great painting, the detail in the grass is excellent, I particularly like the long grasses in front of the boat. Do remember that there will be less detail in the distance. The contrast between the red and green colours is striking, and you've done a beautifully soft sky. Its lovely just as it is, but a teeny suggestion would be to make your birds a bit smaller and less dark - they are a bit on the big side, and because they are so quite dark there is a danger that the viewer's eye will go straight to them as the focal point instead of the boat. But overall you should be very proud of this painting. best wishes, Carrie.   ps, thank you so much for your review, it really does mean a lot to me to know that you enjoyed the class so much and found it helpful.

Thank you Carrie 😊 I appreciate your critique. As soon as you mentioned it I realized you are absolutely correct and I was able to adjust some of them and I look forward to applying them to my next projects 👍🏻

Gorgeous colours! Lovely painting :D

This is lovely, Pennie. The colors and reflections feel so calm and peaceful. 🙂

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