Hello, I am asked to make a table decoration panel for the bride and groom, Diana and Edgars. These are the very first sketches I've made as a part of decorative lettering for this table decor. The first one, is purely first spontaneous impression, how it would look. The second one, in a pink ink shows my willingness to fix mistakes I made in a first sketch.

Hopefully, I will finish the lettering in a waterolour, but surely, first - the composition, the style must be set up before I move forwards. Happily, as I speak, I have a bit of the time to refine it before it goes out to the client. Frankly, I am a bit nervous, about all this project, because this is the first time I am taking a Full Monogram lettering work for the Bride and Groom.

Please feel free to comment, if you have some spare moment to look at. Thank you in advance to all of you!This is that very first sketch for Wedding monogram. To my opinion, space between two names - lines is too narrow and arrangement too crowded. Will try to fix it.Now, I am trying to fix space problem between two words and working out another option for the letter "D". Although the curve moment for the word 'Edgars" looks somehow fine, the word "Diana"goes totally down, too much down to my taste.