Sene from Dealing with Dragons, Written by Patricia C. Wrede

My thumbnail:

The sene that I used:

This is my sketch of the characters.

This took me a LOT longer than I expected (around 4 hours), but I like how it turned out a lot! I did all of it digitally on Procreate, using the "Derwent" sketching pencil and a pen that I made. I'm using an Ipad, so some of the text may have to autocorrect to another word, if so I apologize.  I would appreciate any constructive criticism!