PJ May

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Hey Cindy! This was actually really great, my first piece of advice would be in regards to the audio. I found the background music was ever so slightly too high, it might be worth lowering it just a touch and also boosting the volume of your voice. I really liked the addition of the timelapse at the end of the video, even in a short-form video it's important to make sure things are always happening on screen to keep people engaged and you did that really well. My only other piece of advice would be to maybe have another piece of overlay footage near the start, maybe showing the finished mask and you wearing it, just as an extra way to really grab people's attention. Overall though, this was really great!

Hi PJ, 
Thanks for the great course, I only have a GoPro to shoot videos, please take a look, I'd love to hear your criticisms. All feedback is welcome. Used simple cross dissolve transitions, some broll with the picture in picture as well. 
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nyD9GVJCoEI&amp;feature=youtu.be
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