Matthew Dewey

Rédaction créative : Écrivez une histoire de Thriller croyable

It's good, but don't be too vague with the imagery. Often, what sounds good doesn't always make much sense - like the grandfather clock waiting, or the heart in the throat yet bouncing against the ribcage. As for the silence being like drumming, it also doesn't make sense. Nothing connects. When setting the scene or establishing tension, try to make each line run into the next logically. I recommend keeping it simple, too. If the lines are vague and disconnected, you will only waste the readers time.

Thank you for the constructive criticism! Super helpful! :)

Happy to contribute! If you need any writing reviewed, I would be happy to help.

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